Time will tell #tanka

freeverserevolution writing prompt;

the puzzle of life

guaged by fated ticks and tocks

unsolved mystery

some crave some dread its passing

each outcome for each choice deserved

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  1. memadtwo says:

    Fated ticks and tocks–you could write a story around those ominous words. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yeah, i see it now. Im leaning towards a thriller/horror

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      1. memadtwo says:

        Definitely.

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  2. Wisdom: beautifully versed.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Gabriela

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  3. Ticks and tocks. I like that.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks, glad to have you reading

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      1. You are very welcome.

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  4. -Eugenia says:

    Superb piece – love “ticks and tocks”!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks a bunch. Glad you read and liked it.💙🍀

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure!

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  5. And that is time that clicks and clocks with the passage of time for each and everyone. Awesome 👍 👍👍 poem.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Glad you appreciate. Thank you so much

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      1. Welcome 😊😊😊😊 always Jude.

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Right back atcha

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      3. 😊😊😊😊😊

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