what do you see photo prompt by Sadje
Silence. A dead silence that speaks,
and whispers of dread and dismay
We knew there’d be dark days on our journey
but not like this; this we did not see,
did not foretell
Yet here we are, rowing through a carvenous doom
threatened by stalactites-and-mites
sharp and poised to impel the slightest mistake
We knew our journey to a lasting love would be tested
But not here in this place,
blue with disguise
aglow with treacherous beauty
calm with still eerie waters
I stroke with caution yet regret ripples carelessly through this pool of memory.
Distorting and revealing reflections of past failure
The slosh as I row echoes danger,
bouncing with ill omens,
oscillating a lover’s fears
A fear of committment,
a fear of heart’s surrender
But on we row,
on we stroke,
on we slosh,
taking solace in being by each other’s side
in this tiny boat of hope
sailing to a light of day unseen
a light of future so near
#whatdoyousee
You had me with that opening line – this is excellent, Jude, love it! X
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Thank you so much Heart, i toyed with going full horror but changed my mind. Glad you like it, means a lotππ
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This was a great read — a real journey.
We knew thereβd be dark days on our journey
but not like this; this we did not see,
did not foretell — my favourite lines, and so true. Hard to not relate.
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Thank you for taking time to read. Glad to hear from you again, it’s been a while.
We can never really know can we!π things always change, guess we have to adapt
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That’s true as well π
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A beautiful analogy to life, regrets and facing the challenges in life. Thanks for joining in the prompt.
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Thank you Sadje. Great prompt ππΎππΎ
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Youβre welcome π
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I can feel the uncertainty change to hope. Both are present in the image. (K)
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Thank you for reading
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I especially liked your poem, Jude, for it reminded me of all the trials of 2019. Hopefully, we can steer our boats to a much better 2020…
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Cheers to thatπ»
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Wow!! π
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π€βΊοΈcheersπ»
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Brilliant piece, Jude!
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Thank you Eugenia
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My pleasure!
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Lovely poem. Enjoyed the positivity in the poem.
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Thank you Kit, great to have you reading π€π
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You are welcome. π
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Beautifully written, Jude. A life together is indeed an interesting journey.
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Glad you see that. Thank you for your kind comment Chris, glad to have you reading
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My pleasure, Jude.
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