Fallen
one at a time
a gift between lovers
from solid tree to shapeless breeze
a token
drifting aloof in wind’s turmoil
Love, caressed and careened
each leaf adorned
offered
Fallen
one at a time
a gift between lovers
from solid tree to shapeless breeze
a token
drifting aloof in wind’s turmoil
Love, caressed and careened
each leaf adorned
offered
Beautiful poem
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thank you so much T.K, i was surrounded by trees when i wrote it, it was really beautiful the way the wind plays in the treess
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My pleasure 😇
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😊
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Look who wrote a gorgeous cinquain. I have no idea how to write one.
Fabulous Jude.
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thanks Gabriella ❤️, you can follow the link at the beginning of this post to Colleen’s post, she explains syllabic poetry so well there
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My pleasure. I will. Problem is that I am so rebellious 🙂
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oh my God i know the feeling, i want to rebel in all my haikus and tankas but i also appreciate the discipline required
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I have to try harder 🙂
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there’s a satisfaction to creating something within the rules, plus i always go and write without the rules when i want to be wild and free, i like the balance it brings,haha
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🙂
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Heart-Touching, so soft and so eloquent. Beautifully penned, Jude. Thank you! xo
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Thanks for the appreciation Amy.
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Jude, the image of falling leaves makes this poem even more special. ❤
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Thank you Colleen. Glad you like it♥
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Lovely! ❤
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Thank you Deborah, glad to have you here reading♣
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much♥glad you liked it
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What a nice poem
🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you Louisa, I’m really glad when you leave your thoughts on here
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🙏🦋💙🦋🙏
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😊💜
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❣
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Lovely poem! I love cinquains. ❤
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Thank you Saly, grateful for your thoughts on here♥♥
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This is a beautiful piece, Jude. I love the line – drifting aloof in wind’s turmoil.
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Thank you Eugenia, so glad you like it
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You’re welcome!
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😊
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A gorgeous, Butterfly Cinquain, Jude! The picture pairs beautifully with your poem, too. 😀
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Thank you Vashti, glad you appreciate it 🌺🌷
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Always. 🙂
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♥♥♣
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