Longing #poetry

What do you see

Golden evening sun
spraying magic scenes of hope
a light splash of dreams
how you transform the mundane 
seducing love from coming night 
,
desire holds the flame of your passion aloft
an offer, a wish, a promise
beckoning full moon’s benevolent stare,
Wont you love me forever
,
,
#whatdoyousee


24 Comments Add yours

  1. Sadje says:

    Such a touching and beautiful poem Jude. Thanks a lot for participating in the prompt

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sadje.😊🌸

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

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  2. theresaly520 says:

    So eloquent and lovely ❤

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Saly, I’m always happy when you leave a comment♥♥

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      1. theresaly520 says:

        I’m glad! 🙂

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  3. Chris Hall says:

    This is lovely, Jude! I particularly like the line: ‘seducing love from coming night’.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks Chris, the image immediately put me in that mood. Thank you for your thoughts. They mean so much♥

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  4. jenanita01 says:

    A wonderful poem, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for the appreciation. So glad you like it♥♥♣♣

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  5. memadtwo says:

    A song of transformation that echoes the picture well. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you. Glad you like it. ♥♡

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  6. D65 says:

    I’m not sure if you’ve received my comment – I can’t tell if it’s working or not. I have listed your blog in my wrap up for the 15 Day Blogging Challenge, I hope that is alright!

    https://daysixtyfive.com/2020/01/23/15-day-blogging-challenge-wrap-up/

    Thank you 🙂

    Jess

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yeah I get them. Thank you Jessica for the mention. It’s my pleasure to have read your posts on the 15day challenge

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  7. Jules says:

    I am a fan of all things ‘Moon’ 😀

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    1. judeitakali says:

      it is pretty magical isnt it, mysterious, exciting and primal even

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      1. Jules says:

        The tidal tugs, phases, stories… so much magic so little time… 😀

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      2. judeitakali says:

        all we can do is ebb and flow in the magic and enjoy it all, xo

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      3. Jules says:

        It’s fascinating to learn of the different names of the full moons that different peoples have too 🙂
        I actually have a family member who was born on a Blue Moon… The second full moon in the same month!

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      4. judeitakali says:

        i need to remind myself of those but i like the crescents too and all the superstitions that come along with them

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      5. Jules says:

        I like my own names for the various crescents…bowl, banana, fingernail… 😉
        And there are also special rituals for the New or no visible moon.

        Like

  8. judeitakali says:

    it is pretty magical isnt it, mysterious, exciting and primal even

    Like

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