Hi everyone, so me and Pooja of lifesfinewhine , an incredibly successful blogger and beautiful soul, joined together and wrote some thrilling poetry. It has her famous six word stories and my not-so-famous haikus plus our combined verse. I hope you enjoy this as much as we enjoyed writing it…
Walking home alone, unknowingly being stalked…
Beth clings to the lingering scent of James’ perfume
Lost in blissful reminisces of the magical hour spent in his arms
Savouring the fading taste of him on her lips
That reckless euphoria blinds her to an insipid shadow that creeps along in her wake
But her gut instincts cannot ignore the insidious chill that tags at her skin, ripping her from her walking fantasy
Slowly she becomes aware
Something is different
She is nolonger walking alone
She can feel something creeping behind her
Something silent but dangerous
She begins walking faster, constantly looking over her shoulder
In her haste she misses a step, trips and tumbles onto the asphalt
Quick as a flash something scurries from the shadows and pins her, facedown to the ground
Foul drool slurps allover her neck and squelches into her hair
But its grip loosens and she wriggles free, adrenaline springing her to her feet and to freedom
But the predator lives for the chase and she’s unwittingly herded into its lair
There is no where to run
Still omniscient night
giving joy, hiding terror
Beware the shadows
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So, Pooja did the Italics and I did the normal case but it feels like one piece right?(haha just biasing you, but you can judge for yourself).
Let me know what you think about this piece and if you’d like to join me in a collaboration, please email me on judekirya37@gmail.com
Please check out Pooja’s incredible blog here;
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This is thrilling, Jude and Pooja. 🙂
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Thank you so much Kitty. My WordPress comments are glitching
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You are welcome, Jude. 🙂
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🤗💛😊🌷
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Really well done, both of you. That was a super-creepy read 🙂
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Thank you Chris. Don’t know what is wrong in my comments section. My WordPress is glitching. I’m glad this creeped you out tho. Hehe
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Very nicely blended. Were you not to have mentioned it was a collaboration I would not have taken it as such.
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Thank you Violet. Don’t know what happened to my comments. My WordPress is glitching. But I’m glad you enjoyed this ♥️
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Had so much fun working on this with you and thank you so much for your very kind intro!
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Very much my pleasure Pooja. It was really so fun 💛😊
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It really was a lot of fun!!
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Beautiful poem and great collaboration
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it 😊
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Lovely piece! It does have a continuity, feels one, aside from the subtle difference of writing styles. Great collab, Jude
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Thank you Bubble. I discovered that now and then, it’s fun to write with someone or collaborate on a post. xox
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That it is!
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😊♥️
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Thrilling collaboration! Enjoyed the final piece. Tingling!
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Thank you so much Saly, it was a new and exciting feeling not having the character’s fate in my hands but devising it with someone else
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What an interesting experience! Often I wonder the feelings that two authors have when writing a book together. Intertwined emotions!
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You should try it.
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This gave me chills, oh gosh.
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Thank you? I never know how to respond to giving someone the chills, whether to say sorry or say thank you 😅
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Haha don’t you worry, the fact it gave me chills is a praise enough 😊
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🤝👌🏾
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A beautiful collaboration Jude snd Pooja! 🌹
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Thank you so much Holy, sorry the comment was spammed
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Really Good collaboration!!! Here after your recent collaboration!!
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Oh thank you, you’re so precious to me
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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