Holding on

What do you see #22



Heaven’s harbour
beyond the evil of this world
undimmed and undulled
refuge to beauty undying
I search for you my love
beyond the reach of pain and loss
mapping your pathway through splendid stars
I search for you my love
on distant planets far beyond Mars
longing to ease my heart’s demands
I brave the brush and brack of sinister lands
to find you where you said you’d always be
longing to ease my heart’s demands
A glint, a wink, is all I seek to see
trailing ellipses of the story of ‘we’
,
Flashing the heavens
moarse-coding my love to you
awaiting your sign


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38 Comments Add yours

  1. memadtwo says:

    It does seem like there are entire universes separating us from those we love right now. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yes sadly it does, 😟 but it’ll get better 🌼

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  2. A.S. says:

    Ahhh…the pain of separation!! Such beautiful emotions, especially the image associated. Lovely poem, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Bubble. Sometimes the vast stars make you believe

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      1. A.S. says:

        They definitely give you strength and remind us that we are a miniscule entity in this vast universe. 🖤

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Humbling beauty

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  3. Chris Hall says:

    This is so beautifully written, Jude. You really have a feel for lovely language 🙂

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That’s a wonderful thing to say, thank you Chris ❤️🌷

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  4. Sadje says:

    Love the poignancy of feelings expressed in your poem.
    Thanks for being a part of the challenge.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much 🤗🌷Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yeah and a little sad tho

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      1. Romance is often sad, isn’t it? It either becomes sad or boring [giggle]

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Nooo, no I can’t bring myself to agree with that😟😰

        Like

  5. Wow. That’s gorgeous.
    “Flashing the heavens
    moarse-coding my love to you
    awaiting your sign”
    I hope the sign comes soon.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      It comes, more like hope it keeps coming

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      1. Well, your poem is superb so it will come,

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Haha thank you Gabriella

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      3. My pleasure Jude. Take good care of yourself my fiend.

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      4. judeitakali says:

        I’m trying, you too 🌷

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  6. J. S. says:

    Great poem! When I see this picture… I see a guy studying incense or smoke in the galaxy…

    -j

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you and Yeah, i can see what you mean. Also Like magic dust.

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      1. J. S. says:

        Yes. That’s another good one.

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  7. AmyRose🌹 says:

    I’ve got tears in my eyes, Jude. This just touched me heart. xo

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m happy this touched you Amy. Thank you for sharing your feeling about it, it encourages me to keep writing 💛🌼. I hope you’re safe Amy🌷

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      1. AmyRose🌹 says:

        I’m safe, Jude. Really. Changes I’m making over at my blog …. my REAL busy season has begun. I’m opening my massive gardens for the season. Wish me luck! I’ll need it! LOL

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Good luck Amy, what changes exactly? And I can’t wait to see the garden photos

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      3. AmyRose🌹 says:

        I’m closing comments. I just cannot be here and outside in my gardens at the same time. Comments will be open now and then again. This is the only way I can possibly do all what I have to do. xo

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      4. judeitakali says:

        Alright, do what you gotta do

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  8. Well written Jude! 🤩

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much, glad you like it

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  9. -Eugenia says:

    This is beautifully touching, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Eugenia,❤️🌷

      Like

  10. msjadeli says:

    A prayer out to the cosmos to your love. So spiritual and beautiful.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jade, for this beautiful response.🌼

      Liked by 1 person

      1. msjadeli says:

        You’re welcome.

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