Colleen’s challenge A cinquain challenge
Sweetness
subtle but deep
lips that tease, eyes that lure
delicate words dipped in honey
Sensual
Love me
reach out, touch me
for my heart is open
and all my body surrenders
Captive
Bewitched
enslaved, entranced
bastard feelings return
emotions hitherto disowned
reclaimed
Moon, sun
all light inflames
like an orchid she blooms
lustful by night, angel by day
Complete
Alone
Us together
re-living love anew
tastes of first times, a kiss lingers
Renewed
For all those couples quarantined together, a poem to inspire you to renew and replenish estranged relationships.
Lovely, Jude!
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Thank you Chris, I hope you enjoyed this one🌼
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I did. I loved the rhythm particularly.
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Thank you so much Chris
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Wow! Beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed this🌷
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romantic! (K)
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Thank you K, I’m glad you like this
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A lovely, romantic verse…
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Thank you Sue for coming over and reading 🙂
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Beautiful indeed, Jude!
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Thank you so much Bubble
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You’re most welcome!
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You have lots of inspiration, I should be asking some to you! It is a romantic poem, I guess you are in love! 🙂
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Haha thank you, I’m happy you find it romantic but this is just based on past experiences of love
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Oh, so well done!
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Thank you so much ❤️ Traci 🌷
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Love me
reach out, touch me
for my heart is open
and all my body surrenders
Captive
What a Line. I like this
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you like that one
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That’s nice
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful Jude! I love the present feelings!😊
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Thank you so much Saly, I’m glad you do
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Wow. Beautiful, romantic. Nicely done, Jude😊
And I like the note at the end about second chances.
Pat
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked this😊
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The feelings have been done so much justice. Although I’ve never been in love but this sure his something in me. Lovely as always!
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Thank you Shruti, it’s challenging to bring out those emotions in a cinquain poem
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A Crown Cinquain! Oh, my goodness… this is good stuff. You have a romantic heart. Good for you. ❤
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Thank you Colleen, I appreciate this ❤️
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You’re welcome. Good job!
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😇😊🤗
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Beautiful and full of passion!
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Thank you so much Merrill. I’m glad you like it 😊
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😀
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Very romantic and sensual Jude. I like how you ensured that it made a perfect crown, they all mesh perfectly together, one seguing on to the other building in intensity towards the end. Excellent stuff 🙂
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Thank you so much, this really gladdens me. Thank you 😁😇
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