Renewed Love (A Crown Cinquain)

Colleen’s challenge A cinquain challenge

Sweetness
subtle but deep
lips that tease, eyes that lure
delicate words dipped in honey
Sensual

Love me
reach out, touch me
for my heart is open
and all my body surrenders
Captive

Bewitched
enslaved, entranced
bastard feelings return
emotions hitherto disowned
reclaimed

Moon, sun
all light inflames
like an orchid she blooms
lustful by night, angel by day
Complete

Alone
Us together
re-living love anew
tastes of first times, a kiss lingers
Renewed


For all those couples quarantined together, a poem to inspire you to renew and replenish estranged relationships.

36 Comments Add yours

  1. Chris Hall says:

    Lovely, Jude!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Chris, I hope you enjoyed this one🌼

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Chris Hall says:

        I did. I loved the rhythm particularly.

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Thank you so much Chris

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  2. Aanchal says:

    Wow! Beautifully expressed.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed this🌷

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  3. memadtwo says:

    romantic! (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you K, I’m glad you like this

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  4. Sue Vincent says:

    A lovely, romantic verse…

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sue for coming over and reading πŸ™‚

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  5. A.S. says:

    Beautiful indeed, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Bubble

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      1. A.S. says:

        You’re most welcome!

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  6. Elizabeth says:

    You have lots of inspiration, I should be asking some to you! It is a romantic poem, I guess you are in love! πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Haha thank you, I’m happy you find it romantic but this is just based on past experiences of love

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much ❀️ Traci 🌷

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Adam Green says:

    Love me
    reach out, touch me
    for my heart is open
    and all my body surrenders
    Captive
    What a Line. I like this

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you like that one

      Like

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you 😊

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  8. theresaly520 says:

    Beautiful Jude! I love the present feelings!😊

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Saly, I’m glad you do

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  9. jazzytower says:

    Wow. Beautiful, romantic. Nicely done, Jude😊
    And I like the note at the end about second chances.
    Pat

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked this😊

      Like

  10. Shruti Pathak says:

    The feelings have been done so much justice. Although I’ve never been in love but this sure his something in me. Lovely as always!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Shruti, it’s challenging to bring out those emotions in a cinquain poem

      Liked by 2 people

  11. A Crown Cinquain! Oh, my goodness… this is good stuff. You have a romantic heart. Good for you. ❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Colleen, I appreciate this ❀️

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You’re welcome. Good job!

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      2. judeitakali says:

        πŸ˜‡πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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  12. merrildsmith says:

    Beautiful and full of passion!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Merrill. I’m glad you like it 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Very romantic and sensual Jude. I like how you ensured that it made a perfect crown, they all mesh perfectly together, one seguing on to the other building in intensity towards the end. Excellent stuff πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much, this really gladdens me. Thank you πŸ˜πŸ˜‡

      Liked by 1 person

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