Seeking Safety (A tanka poem)

what do you see photo prompt

Bright lights, pitch black tales
Neon dreams born from darkness
I know you are here
hope hiding in the shadows
when miracles disappear

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Hope is our biggest asset in times of despair. May we not lose sight of it.

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  1. michnavs says:

    Indeed hope is just a sight away..brilliant take on the prompt

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Michelle, I’m glad you agree with me 🌼💛

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  2. memadtwo says:

    May we keep it safe and alive. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yes K, I’m with you on that 🌼

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  3. Sadje says:

    Great poem! Love the message. Thanks for joining in the challenge

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sadje, it’s a very good prompt, challenging

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      1. Sadje says:

        Thanks Jude.

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  4. Chris Hall says:

    Beautifully put, Jude! While we share and enjoy our poems and our stories we will always have hope.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Chris! Yes indeed, you’re right. If we can do something we love, there will always be hope

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  5. Jay Bleu says:

    A world of opposites. . . we are all together yet apart at the same time.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      This makes so much sense. Very well put. Thank you for sharing this

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      1. Jay Bleu says:

        You’re welcome!

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  6. You are unbelievable here. You left me speechless. Bravo my dear friend.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Gabriella, i had to look deep into this, I’m glad it brought out my message in this poetic form

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      1. It’s a breath of beauty. It’s fantastic.

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Thank you 🌷

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  7. AmyRose🌹 says:

    Hope is high, Jude. I am seeing SO much good already coming out of this disaster. What a fascinating image …. and your words go perfectly with it. xo

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Amy, yeah the photoprompt was a very interesting one, I thought about in so many ways

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  8. PoojaG says:

    That’s such a good response to the prompt!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Pooja ❤️🌷

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      1. PoojaG says:

        You’re welcome!

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  9. A.S. says:

    Indeed, hope is our biggest ally in the difficult times.
    Great piece, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Bubble ❤️🤗

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  10. -Eugenia says:

    Awesome piece, Jude! We all need hope. 🌞

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Eugenia 🌼

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure!

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  11. Jules says:

    Hope is a valuable asset!
    Stay safe and sane.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      You too Jules, thank you

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  12. msjadeli says:

    Your poem brings me hope, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad it does. Thank you Jade

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      1. msjadeli says:

        You’re welcome.

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