On misty nights fogged in questions and thought
the truth beams from a dark secluded window
as trees whisper secrets, and lies scurry below
Her divine visage splutters through my mind unsought
Cherry-red lips and the memories they wrought
A widowed love and the sorrow she would bestow
How cruel that truth would be and how could I know
‘That, which should heal would leave me captured and caught
When the mist is thickest, only then can I see
The light of truth, dwelling hidden in the dark
Through fogs of mystery, I find what’s meant to be
Looking hard, thinking deep, there the answer lurks
To know what is mine, and what is meant for me
Embarked on my journey, sheltered in love’s ark
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I used the Petrarchan Sonnet form for the first time in this poem. I hope you enjoy it.
You can read more about the Petrarchan Sonnet form here
This is a beautiful poem Jude. Love the message in here.
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Thank you Sadje, this form really opened up some possibilities for me
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You’re welcome 😉
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Loved this line ….When the mist is thickest, only then can I see
The light of truth ….. How true in more ways then one. Excellent prose, Jude. Thank you! xo
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I’m so glad you liked that one Amy. It hit me with alot of depth
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I think we are always traveling through fogs of mystery…but every once in awhile the light breaks through. (K)
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Yes indeed, a prayer or hope answered
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What a great piece. It will stay with me for a long time. Gorgeous.
“A widowed love and the sorrow she would bestow
How cruel that truth would be and how could I know”
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I’m really Glad you appreciate this🌷. I delved a bit deep into each of those lines.
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I loved it. Really you are talented. Capital T. I am not joking. I hope to see your poetry collection soon. ❤️
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Aww shucks😊 I don’t know how to do a collection or any of that???😔
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Haha! Of course you know 🙂
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Remarkable piece, Jude!! Very Deep and profound thoughts ❤️. I love “When the mist is thickest, only then can I see
The light of truth, dwelling hidden in the dark” ❤️❤️🙏
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Thank you bubble. I’m glad you like this one, I’ve been doing a lot of contemplation these last few days,
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It shows! The lockdown has pushed everyone into a different tangent. Hope you are doing well.
Take care
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I’m doing okay. Are you well?
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Yes, Jude, I am okay! Thank you for asking 😊
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Such beautiful writing and passion in each verse. Wow! What an enjoyable read. So lovely and powerful.
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Hi, I’m so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts 🌷
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This is very interesting, Jude. The words are almost conflicting. I think love is like that.
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Yeah love is rarely what we expected it to be Roberta 🌷
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Once again this can apply to so many situations. Struggles and hope both are conveyed so well! Love your style of writing.
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Thank you Pallavi. I’m so happy you liked the style and the message within
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Really well written!
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Thank you so much Pooja
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You’re welcome!
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🌷🌼
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Lovely message beautifully conveyed. 🙂
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Thank you Kitty, it’s nice whenever you read🌷
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Nice of you to say so, thank you, Jude. 🙂
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