The Perfect Duet (A collaboration post)

Hi guys, I’m back writing with Pooja from lifesfinewhine.

We came up with this duet in relatively next to no time. That’s how natural it ebbed and flowed.

I hope you all enjoy this;
Pooja wrote in (normal italics).
I did the (bold italics)
Watch out for those six word stories at the end, little delights.

He takes me out to my favourite restaurant
I say no to dessert but he orders some anyway
And then we go for a romantic movie
And hold each other close
The perfect ending to a perfect day

She comes whenever I need her
She favours wine but brings whiskey for two
And when we go to watch my favourite team
She spouts banter on my behalf
The perfect beginning to a perfect evening

He wants to spend the night at home
Just having pizza and watching some movies
He brings me flowers when I’m down
And laughs with me when I’m happy
He’s just there for me because he’s all I need

She wants to spend our free days in the park
Breathing the air and stealing kisses in public
She carries a snack when I’m not in the mood
Unhealthy and sweet, a special treat
She makes me believe that she’s everything I need

,

Is she too good for me

I know he can do better

Sometimes I wonder why she stays

Forever grateful he settled for me


I hope you enjoyed this.
I think the simple things are what make love perfect, amidst all its imperfections.

Pooja is an incredible person, quite gifted with insight and exceptionally kind.
Please go on over and have a look at her site; lifesfinewhine (you can thank me later)

If you’d like to write with me (you know; meld minds, combine ideas…), you can find my contact info here
To check out the other collaborations I’ve done, click here

I’m looking forward to knowing what you think about this piece.
Stay safe, stay loving.

54 Comments Add yours

  1. Love flowed seamlessly between the verses, complementing and completing it. The tiny six words stories were the cherry on the cake. Wonderful team work, Jude and Pooja!!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Rhadika. I’m glad you enjoyed it, it was really fun๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒผ

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      1. My pleasure. Btw, I spell my name as Radhika ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Oh, I apologize, I don’t know why I’ve been seeing it wrong.

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      3. Happens sometimes ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. It sounds like the perfect relationship. The characters are exactly right for one another.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      They do seem perfect, now that I look at it. But alas, fiction. Thank you so much Kim

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  3. justcalmwildness says:

    I looove this!!! You make love look so beautiful!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jackie. I’m glad you like it ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’›๐ŸŒท

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  4. Jai Lynn says:

    This was beautiful โค So honest and REAL. I felt it, great job โค โค โค

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Lynn, it did flow so well

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  5. Sadje says:

    What a fantastic collaboration. Love this poem.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot Sadje. I’m glad you did ๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒผ

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      1. Sadje says:

        Youโ€™re welcome Jude.

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  6. Beautiful. Bravo to both of you.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Gabriella ๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒท

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      1. My pleasure ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒธ

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  7. Chris Hall says:

    Wonderful collaboration! The two voices (your voices) work so well together, like those couples who finish each other’s sentences.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Haha, thank you Chris, but there was some thinking time in between.
      I’m glad you enjoyed this ๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒท

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  8. michnavs says:

    Ohhh wow….you guys really nailed it again…it reminds me of those days..lol..

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Haha, the feeling of love doesn’t change, it just evolves I think. So the days are not all gone definitely

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  9. ezee life says:

    Wow, its cute.. Can i like steal it and send a screenshoot to him? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Haha, he might use anything in between the lines in his defence. But yes you can, and sprinkle some reference our way too

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      1. ezee life says:

        Will do, thanks

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  10. Janani says:

    Such pretty lines. Lifted my mood up just like that โค๏ธโค๏ธ love to both you and Pooja

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m happy it had a positive effect on you Janani

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