Forbidden skies #writephoto

The dream was to fly

Planes and wings we invented

Ways to see the land

But none knows sky more than earth

Its high peak and hilltop kiss

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Beyond that horizon, my family remains6wordstory

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For;

Reena’s exploration challenge ,

Sue’s writephoto prompt ,

Shreya’s Saturday six word story .

44 Comments Add yours

  1. michnavs says:

    Ahhhhh this is breath taking Jude….

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Michelle. I’m glad you like it

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  2. Lovely weave of the prompts Jude 👍🏻

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika, 🌸

      Like

  3. kittysverses says:

    Wow! Lovely combination of the prompts, Jude. Nice message. 🙂

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Kitty, it really felt right. I’m glad it came out nicely

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. 🙂

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  4. Era says:

    Wow, beautiful

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

      Like

      1. Era says:

        You’re welcome ☺

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  5. Silver Stone says:

    Loved this take on all the prompts!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you did🌼

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      1. Silver Stone says:

        Anytime 😄

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  6. All the prompts beautifuly woven, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam

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      1. You are welcome. 🌷

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  7. Sue Vincent says:

    I love that penultimate line and the thought behind it, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sue, I’m glad you like it

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  8. Sadje says:

    Very well done!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad you like Sadje🤗

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      1. Sadje says:

        👍👍👍

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  9. memadtwo says:

    None knows sky more than earth…that’s beautiful Jude. (K)

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  10. sammicakes says:

    beautiful ❤

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sammi

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  11. Very nice, Jude. What you have said is true.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Hi Roberta, I’m glad to see your comment. Thank you 🌼

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  12. Reena Saxena says:

    Only the hilltops know if sky is an illusion or reality.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      A mysterious twist, I think them two are secret lovers

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  13. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Forbidden Skies …. by judeitakali

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Reena

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  14. Elizabeth says:

    This poem is cute! It is interesting that our view is always the opposite, from the earth we see the sky, but when we are on a plane our focus turns to the earth!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I guess earth is tangible and the sky is a dream

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      1. Elizabeth says:

        yes! 🌎

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  15. Beautiful takes on the prompt but that six word story stole my heart! Beautifully written,Jude. Thanks a lot for joining in

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That makes me so happy Shweta. I’m glad you liked it 💕🌷

      Like

  16. Jules says:

    I like the land knows the sky… such an intimate relationship that oft gets blocked by man made objects.
    Thinking of a night sky taken from space and all the illuminated cities below…

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    1. judeitakali says:

      A very vivid picture. Thank you very much Jules🌷🌷

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  17. bejamin4 says:

    Beautifully written!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much

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