Breakthrough #writephoto

Come! the ocean calls
Beyond that barrier reef
Across those jagged banks
Away from protections long used

For progress lies beyond your lonely peninsula
Enlightenment glistens from over the horizon
And hope drifts in currents unexplored

Come! your future calls
Outside your familiar
Where breakthroughs lie


Mankind lies on the threshold of harmony with nature.
A few bold steps to take
A legislation away
Beyond our fatal comfort zone
Breakthroughs await

For while we think, time wanes. – 6wordstory


For

Sue’s write-photo prompt

Reena’s exploration challenge

Shweta’s 6-word-story prompt

62 Comments Add yours

  1. Reena Saxena says:

    Beautifully penned!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena. You asked some potent questions

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  2. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Breakthrough —- by judeitakali

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena

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  3. Love the gentle tone of persuasion, Jude! Wonderfully crafted.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam. I’m glad you like this.

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      1. You are welcome.🌷

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  4. HappySoul says:

    I liked the word fatal with comfort zone! Well penned!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you appreciate that. Alot of us live in a false comfort zone

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Very true!

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  5. Era says:

    Beautiful ☺

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era🌷

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      1. Era says:

        My pleasure 😊

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  6. Jules says:

    May we all contribute to the breakthrough of compassion to aid our home world and all of humanity.

    Unfortunately… some political action is often the lesser of two unhappy choices.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jules. Yeah but any action goes some way at least

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      1. Jules says:

        I would very much like to believe that the kindness of one smile can cause ripples of happiness πŸ˜€

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Yes indeed it can. Thank you so much

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  7. Sadje says:

    I like your invitation to seek further from our comfort zone

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sadje πŸ’›

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re always welcome πŸ™

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  8. Beautiful weave of prompts Jude πŸ‘πŸ»

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika

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  9. There’s always something to be gained from stepping outside of our comfort zone.
    Beautifully penned, Jude. And I loved your six word story. Thanks for joining in πŸ˜„

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shweta. I’m so glad you like this

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      1. Pleasure πŸ™‚

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  10. Silver Stone says:

    Amazing takes on the prompts, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Silver

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  11. Beautiful and inspirational. Bravo.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so so much Gabriella πŸ™πŸΎπŸ€—

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      1. My pleasure Jude 🌹

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  12. memadtwo says:

    Such strong positive thoughts–we need them. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much K

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  13. Silent Hour says:

    So beautiful!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much BeeπŸ’•

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      1. Silent Hour says:

        Always a pleasure, Jude πŸ™‚

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  14. Sue Vincent says:

    Superb, Jude. Our future is never more than a choice away.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sue, very succinctly put

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  15. Rhen Laird says:

    Oh WOWZA, this is Gorgeous writing (I love the ocean/sea). I also LOVE your 6-word story–another wow! Thank you for your visits to my blog–apologies that I’m tardy, getting here πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you found your way here eventually 😊🌼

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      1. Rhen Laird says:

        “Eventually” is pretty much the way it works for me πŸ™‚ Take care of yourself, stay safe and well πŸ™‚

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Take care too. Stay safe and stay reading, I know I will

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      3. Rhen Laird says:

        πŸ™‚

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  16. -Eugenia says:

    Superb piece!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Eugi🌷

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        Most welcome, Jude! 😊

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  17. Vashti Q says:

    I love this line: ‘Mankind lies on the threshold of harmony with nature.’ What a lovely poem. You’re right, our future calls us to step out of our comfort zone, it’s time for a change. πŸ˜€ xo

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you like this Vashti 🌸, thank you so much. I missed your comments and your writing.

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      1. Vashti Q says:

        Awww. Thank you. I’m preparing my manuscript for proofreading, working on the blurb for the back of the book, Amazon description, book cover, and trying to come up with a marketing strategy for my Fantasy Angels Trilogy. It’s hard to also keep up with blogs, Twitter, Instagram, BookBub, Goodreads, and Facebook, but God knows I try. πŸ˜‰ xo

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Oh yeah, that’s quite alot, will watch out for your manuscript.
        I could not manage all that. Now I’m more glad you even got time to read a bit of meπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’›

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  18. PoojaG says:

    Really great poem! And I really liked the six word story at the end!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Pooja. Namaste Ms.6word Sensei, hehe

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      1. PoojaG says:

        Haha πŸ˜‚πŸ˜Š

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      2. judeitakali says:

        πŸ˜‡πŸŒ»

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  19. Sobia says:

    β€˜Outside your familiar
    Where breakthroughs lie’
    Wow… beautifully written. πŸ‘πŸ»
    Loved it πŸ’•

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sobia, I’m glad you liked it

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