Secret Admirer

Is it your smile
that dazzles me
The softness of your voice
that comforts me
The light in your eyes
scrying my future joys
Am I selfish
for thinking you are the answer
Presumptuous
for dreaming you can want me too

I’d like to tell you-
I’m under your spell
I’d like to speak my mind
with the melody from my heart
I’d like to say, I love you
But I cannot
Lest I spook and alarm
For already,
You are too precious to lose
And a little bit of you
Is better than none at all

Paramour of dreams
Peculiar with perfection
My heart surrenders
betrothed and bound to love you
Meant to be, Never to be

Β© judeitakali


The love we give does not vanish. It comes back in different forms

~Hemalather Ramesh~

Stay safe, stay loving.

73 Comments Add yours

  1. PoojaG says:

    Wow you perfectly captured the feeling of wanting to tell someone how you feel about them but not wanting to lose them from your life. Amazing poem!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Pooja. I’m glad you appreciate this 🌷🌼

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      1. PoojaG says:

        You’re very welcome!

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  2. -Eugenia says:

    A beautiful and romantic poem, Jude.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Eugi🌼

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure! πŸ˜‰

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  3. Jules says:

    I remember school daze and those kind of dreams.
    One can only hope what is meant to be can blossom :DπŸŒΈπŸ€

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yes indeed Jules, sometimes we are powerless 🌻

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  4. Susi Bocks says:

    So lovely, Jude!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Susi. I’m so glad to see your comment 🌼

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You’re welcome! πŸ™‚

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  5. Jude I loved your romantic poem. And you have rightly said Love never Dies. It is very contagious. Lovely and awesome picture too.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Ah, I’m glad you did. Thank you so much for the appreciation Kamal. I’m glad you loved the pictures

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      1. You are always welcome Jude.πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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  6. Nehal Writes says:

    Oh, this can be so relatable

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

  7. T.N. says:

    Well, darn. This is my favourite so far. The emotion/sentiment is… πŸ‘ŒπŸΎβ€οΈ 🌹The language flows so well. It feels perfect. Well done.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. It did flow quite well when I was writing it. It all just slipped from heart to page

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      1. T.N. says:

        Beautiful when that happens

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  8. Beautifula poem and arrangement of words. Love the word ‘scrying’.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Oh thank you so much Daisy. Glad you like it 😊

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