A breath and a tear #writephoto

Said the nimbus to the moor-
What came first
The chicken or the egg
Your breath becomes my burden
My burden your nourishment
Who is mightiest

Gathering storm clouds
Looming distress and longing
Weeping down desire
The earth receives and returns
True love dancing in the air

“Love is the currency for harmony” – six word story


For;

Sue’s writephoto challenge – use the image above

Reena’s exploration challenge – write something cryptic

Shweta’s Saturday six word story prompt – money

I hope you enjoy this.

Stay safe everyone, stay loving.

51 Comments Add yours

  1. Beautiful! ❤️

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I hope you have a lovely Sunday ⛅

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  2. bejamin4 says:

    Cool: “True love dancing in the air”

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. Happy Sunday ⛅

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      1. bejamin4 says:

        Welcome. Happy Sunday!

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  3. HappySoul says:

    Lovely! 😊

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. Happy Sunday ⛅

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      1. HappySoul says:

        you too Jude! Happy Sunday

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  4. It’s so beautiful and heartwarming

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much for the appreciation. Happy Sunday ⛅

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      1. Happy Sunday to you to!! Followed you. Wonderful blog u hv.

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Thank you. I follow you too👌🏾

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      3. Thanks a lot dear!!!!!!!!!! Have a good day!!!!! I thought there is some glitch because some people reported to me some issues they were facing so wanted to make sure. Thanks a lot 😊😊😊☺☺😊☺☺😊☺☺😊

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  5. Beautifully written Jude ❣️

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika 🌸🌼

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  6. Sadje says:

    Oh well done!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sadje, it was quite challenging

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome!

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  7. Reena Saxena says:

    I like these lines especially

    Gathering storm clouds
    Looming distress and longing
    Weeping down desire

    Thanks for joining in!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena. It’s my pleasure 🌼

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  8. Era says:

    So beautiful 😍

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

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      1. Era says:

        It’s a pleasure 😊

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  9. ankushmaster says:

    loved reading it….

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much 🌼

      Like

  10. Elizabeth says:

    I really enjoyed it! Are you in UK? Love “looming distress and longing” !

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    1. judeitakali says:

      No, I’m all the way in East Africa.
      I’m glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much

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  11. justcalmwildness says:

    I looove this💓 💓 💓

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jackie. I’m grateful for your appreciation

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  12. Sue Vincent says:

    Brilliant and beautiful, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sue

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  13. clcouch123 says:

    This is skillfully and thoughtfully crafted. The debate between the cloud and land is engaging.

    I hope you have a safe, new week.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. Have a great new week too

      Like

  14. memadtwo says:

    I love that first line…nimbus and moor are great words. All storms leave us with mixed messages I think. (K)

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much K. Yeah you’re right, they do leave mixed messages ❤️

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  15. kittysverses says:

    Enjoyed all the takes, especially the six words. Well done, Jude. 🙂

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kitty. I’m so glad you enjoyed this🌸

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. 🙂

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  16. Jules says:

    The harmony of nature. Giving and taking…
    I like a good rain. The last few rains we’ve had did nothing to ease the humidity.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      The rain here always comes with a breeze 😉

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  17. Bulbul says:

    You said it! Incredible poem and the story is just perfect with such a beautiful thought! 🌈🤗🌻🤗🙏

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Bubble. I’m glad you enjoyed this 😊

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