Said the nimbus to the moor-
What came first
The chicken or the egg
Your breath becomes my burden
My burden your nourishment
Who is mightiest
Gathering storm clouds
Looming distress and longing
Weeping down desire
The earth receives and returns
True love dancing in the air
“Love is the currency for harmony” – six word story
For;
Sue’s writephoto challenge – use the image above
Reena’s exploration challenge – write something cryptic
Shweta’s Saturday six word story prompt – money
I hope you enjoy this.
Stay safe everyone, stay loving.
Beautiful! ❤️
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Thank you so much. I hope you have a lovely Sunday ⛅
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Cool: “True love dancing in the air”
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Thank you so much. Happy Sunday ⛅
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Welcome. Happy Sunday!
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Lovely! 😊
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Thank you so much. Happy Sunday ⛅
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you too Jude! Happy Sunday
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It’s so beautiful and heartwarming
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Thank you so much for the appreciation. Happy Sunday ⛅
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Happy Sunday to you to!! Followed you. Wonderful blog u hv.
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Thank you. I follow you too👌🏾
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Thanks a lot dear!!!!!!!!!! Have a good day!!!!! I thought there is some glitch because some people reported to me some issues they were facing so wanted to make sure. Thanks a lot 😊😊😊☺☺😊☺☺😊☺☺😊
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Beautifully written Jude ❣️
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Thank you so much Radhika 🌸🌼
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Oh well done!
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Thank you Sadje, it was quite challenging
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You’re welcome!
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I like these lines especially
Gathering storm clouds
Looming distress and longing
Weeping down desire
Thanks for joining in!
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Thank you so much Reena. It’s my pleasure 🌼
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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So beautiful 😍
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Thank you so much Era
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It’s a pleasure 😊
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loved reading it….
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Thank you so much 🌼
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I really enjoyed it! Are you in UK? Love “looming distress and longing” !
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No, I’m all the way in East Africa.
I’m glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much
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I looove this💓 💓 💓
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Thank you so much Jackie. I’m grateful for your appreciation
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Brilliant and beautiful, Jude.
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Thank you so much Sue
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This is skillfully and thoughtfully crafted. The debate between the cloud and land is engaging.
I hope you have a safe, new week.
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Thank you so much. Have a great new week too
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I love that first line…nimbus and moor are great words. All storms leave us with mixed messages I think. (K)
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Thank you so much K. Yeah you’re right, they do leave mixed messages ❤️
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Enjoyed all the takes, especially the six words. Well done, Jude. 🙂
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Thank you so much Kitty. I’m so glad you enjoyed this🌸
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You are welcome, Jude. 🙂
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The harmony of nature. Giving and taking…
I like a good rain. The last few rains we’ve had did nothing to ease the humidity.
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The rain here always comes with a breeze 😉
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You said it! Incredible poem and the story is just perfect with such a beautiful thought! 🌈🤗🌻🤗🙏
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Thank you so much Bubble. I’m glad you enjoyed this 😊
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