Artistic Insights #writephoto

Maybe you can show me
Maybe then I can know
Why my spirit wails
Why I feel tired
Worn by the trials of this life
Why I can’t see the good
Without remembering the bad
Maybe if you try
You can show me who I am

1940 Joan Miro

Paint me
Colour my soul
Curve out all emotion
Weave your hand and splay my essence
Draw deep
Show my sparkle and shade my gloom
Turn me round, see it all
Joys and despairs
Displayed

artnet

Gray abstract artist
Dispassionate in your ways
Perceptive to all
Crafting cubes with multiple views
Deep fears and aching desires

Sean Safarlou

My soul falls upon the canvas
Now I can see through the rain
Now I can see me

“The rain blinds while clearing sight” 6word story


I hope you enjoy this,

For;

Reena’s exploration challengecubism
Sue’s writephoto promptworn
Shweta’s six word story promptrain

Hope you notice the mirrored cinquain and tanka

Happy Sunday and happy belated Eid to my Muslim friends.
Stay safe and stay loving.

56 Comments Add yours

  1. I love this poem, Jude, and the picture is also terrific.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Hi Roberta, I’m glad you do, I really experimented with this one

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      1. I worked very well, Jude.

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  2. In awe at how the words flow effortlessly, conveying so much. Great work Jude ❀ !

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika, it means alot from you

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  3. Era says:

    So so beautifully written 😊😊

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era, I’m having a hard time catching up on reading but I’ll be over to your site eventually

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      1. Era says:

        You’re most welcome 😊😊
        Nothing to worry about, whenever you get time

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  4. justcalmwildness says:

    I love the words and relatable. Great paintings too especially the last one.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jackie. It means alot that you like this

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  5. Reena Saxena says:

    Shapes change with placement of surfaces. Guess the concepts of emotional engineering and emotional intelligence emerged from here.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That makes sense. I also read that this form is used to show all sides of the subject in one piece and I drew on that mostly for inspiration

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      1. Reena Saxena says:

        That’s a good insight!

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  6. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Artistic insights …. by wordeologist

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Reena

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  7. Love how the piece flowed and some thought provoking lines. Wonderfully expressed, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Punam. I actually loved the flow too, I didn’t know it would come out as it did. I’m glad you like it too. xoxo

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      1. You are so welcome. 😊

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  8. Your poems match the pictures exactly. Well done, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That’s awesome, I didn’t know if I’d got the abstract-poetry connection

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  9. Such a beautiful poem, Jude. As for that six word story, I’m speechless. Rain does tend to have that effect, doesn’t it? Thanks for joining in πŸ˜„

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shweta, I’m glad you like it πŸ’•

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      1. You’re very welcome ☺️

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  10. Sadje says:

    This is very good take on the prompt.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‰

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  11. Sue Vincent says:

    Brilliant, Jude. I especially like ‘my soul falls on the canvas’. As a painter, I know that feeling.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you appreciate this Sue. Thank you so much

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  12. memadtwo says:

    You reach into the depths and pull them out into words. Another beauty. (K)

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  13. Reblogged this on Women Who Think Too Much by Jeanne Marie and commented:
    Incredible art and writing from…
    https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/08/02/artistic-insights-writephoto/

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jeanne. I’m so honoured you reblogged this. πŸ€—πŸ˜ƒπŸ’›

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      1. My pleasure…❀

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  14. Wonderfully expressed…

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Singh

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  15. michnavs says:

    “Why I can’t see the good
    Without remembering the bad
    Maybe if you try
    You can show me who I am”…jude you said.perfectly well the sentiments of all those in this.position

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Michelle. I’m glad you read this and I’m glad you can relate πŸ’›πŸŒΌπŸŒΈ

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  16. Jules says:

    Separate, yet cohesive. The last image of the cubes reminds me of the art puzzles where you had to sort of cross your eyes to see the image… I wasn’t very good at them. But I could find the umbrellas! It reminded me of a famous street painting of people in the rain.

    I am also amazed at how some artists can take photographs of peoples faces (hundreds) and then morph that into some recognizable image when it is far from you. You have to be really close to see the details of the faces!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Yeah Jules, I was actually nervous writing about art coz it can be complex but being on WordPress and encountering artists that juxtapose Poetry on their work has made it easier for me to be brave and interpret art because of its close relationship to poetry

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      1. Jules says:

        Art can be poetry with a paint brush …
        (or what ever medium one chooses to use). πŸ–Œβœ’πŸ“Έ

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  17. kittysverses says:

    Wow, the poetry form and the poem are beautifully written. πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kitty ❀️

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. πŸ™‚

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  18. Excellent words so well composed, Jude. Loved the poem.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kamal, I’m glad you enjoyed it

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      1. You are always welcome dear Jude 😊😊😊😊

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  19. Susi Bocks says:

    Just Gorgeous, Jude!! You did a wonderful job of your interpretation of this challenge. πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Susi. It means alot from you πŸŒ·πŸ˜ƒ

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        My pleasure!

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  20. msjadeli says:

    I like what I’ll call captions for the snapshots of the artwork. Wonderful poetry that makes the paintings speak.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jade. I’m glad you appreciate this πŸŒΌπŸ’›πŸŒΈ

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      1. msjadeli says:

        You’re welcome and I do πŸ™‚

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  21. blogbyA says:

    Being an artist I loved this

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Aparna. 🧑

      Like

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