Artistic Insights #writephoto

Maybe you can show me
Maybe then I can know
Why my spirit wails
Why I feel tired
Worn by the trials of this life
Why I can’t see the good
Without remembering the bad
Maybe if you try
You can show me who I am

1940 Joan Miro

Paint me
Colour my soul
Curve out all emotion
Weave your hand and splay my essence
Draw deep
Show my sparkle and shade my gloom
Turn me round, see it all
Joys and despairs
Displayed

artnet

Gray abstract artist
Dispassionate in your ways
Perceptive to all
Crafting cubes with multiple views
Deep fears and aching desires

Sean Safarlou

My soul falls upon the canvas
Now I can see through the rain
Now I can see me

“The rain blinds while clearing sight” 6word story


I hope you enjoy this,

For;

Reena’s exploration challengecubism
Sue’s writephoto promptworn
Shweta’s six word story promptrain

Hope you notice the mirrored cinquain and tanka

Happy Sunday and happy belated Eid to my Muslim friends.
Stay safe and stay loving.

54 Comments Add yours

  1. I love this poem, Jude, and the picture is also terrific.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Hi Roberta, I’m glad you do, I really experimented with this one

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      1. I worked very well, Jude.

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  2. In awe at how the words flow effortlessly, conveying so much. Great work Jude ❀ !

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika, it means alot from you

      Like

  3. Era says:

    So so beautifully written 😊😊

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era, I’m having a hard time catching up on reading but I’ll be over to your site eventually

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      1. Era says:

        You’re most welcome 😊😊
        Nothing to worry about, whenever you get time

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  4. justcalmwildness says:

    I love the words and relatable. Great paintings too especially the last one.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jackie. It means alot that you like this

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  5. Reena Saxena says:

    Shapes change with placement of surfaces. Guess the concepts of emotional engineering and emotional intelligence emerged from here.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That makes sense. I also read that this form is used to show all sides of the subject in one piece and I drew on that mostly for inspiration

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      1. Reena Saxena says:

        That’s a good insight!

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  6. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Artistic insights …. by wordeologist

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Reena

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  7. Love how the piece flowed and some thought provoking lines. Wonderfully expressed, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Punam. I actually loved the flow too, I didn’t know it would come out as it did. I’m glad you like it too. xoxo

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      1. You are so welcome. 😊

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  8. Your poems match the pictures exactly. Well done, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That’s awesome, I didn’t know if I’d got the abstract-poetry connection

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  9. Such a beautiful poem, Jude. As for that six word story, I’m speechless. Rain does tend to have that effect, doesn’t it? Thanks for joining in πŸ˜„

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shweta, I’m glad you like it πŸ’•

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      1. You’re very welcome ☺️

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  10. Sadje says:

    This is very good take on the prompt.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‰

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