Celestial Virtues #writephoto (tanka, prose and cinquain)

Twilight’s crescent moon
Am I wrong to love you so
To share my secrets
To trust in your clairvoyance
How far will optimism go

The moon is a symbol of rebirth,
Its cycle is true and does not falter.
Am I then right,
to whisper earthly dreams beneath its ethereal glow,
to place hopes in its surety,

Luna
Lend me belief
Watch me as I watch you
Share your prescience, show me the way
Guide me

I’ve always thought optimism is a blessing,
That it brings a little happiness in the saddest of times
That to believe is to hope
And hope is boundless.


Empathy is virtue, judgement is divine.

Don’t judge people for their beliefs

Don’t judge all because of one.

~6wordstories~

Images @pixabay

Β© judeitakali


For;

Sue’s writephoto prompt – “crescent”

Reena’s exploration challenge – “How far does optimism go?”

Shweta’s six word story prompt“judge”

Don’t forget to check out the 7th edition of The Saturday Symphony HERE

Enjoy your Sunday

Stay safe, and stay loving.

40 Comments Add yours

  1. justcalmwildness says:

    I looove this. It really reminds me of the beauty of the moon.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you do Jackie. There is something about the moon, so close, yet so far. I hope your weekend is okay.

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  2. Wow! Superbly crafted 😍

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much 🌷

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  3. Era says:

    🀩🀩

    Like

    1. judeitakali says:

      😎😁

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  4. Sadje says:

    Great poem Jude! A marathon of prompts and so well done.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Sadje. I have a post a day, so I have to combine some favorite prompts

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      1. Sadje says:

        You did it so well.

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  5. Reena Saxena says:

    Exquisitely beautiful piece!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena. It means alot from you

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  6. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Celestial Virtues ……. by Jude

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  7. Wonderful piece….

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much SinghπŸ™πŸΎ

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  8. Anisha says:

    I can relate a parallel here… the moon to someone close. Clever craft!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Anisha. I’m glad you can relate πŸ˜ƒ

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  9. theusedlife says:

    Beautiful. I enjoyed this very much.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you. I’m glad you did 😊

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  10. Silent Hour says:

    I don’t know if it is wrong to love so, but I know it’s right to write about it so πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Basilike. It’s a fun heartwarming compliment 🌼🌸

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      1. Silent Hour says:

        I am glad it is πŸ™‚ Have a great day!

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Have a great day tooπŸ’›

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      3. Silent Hour says:

        Thank you!

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  11. -Eugenia says:

    You never cease to amaze me, Jude. Every piece, a masterpiece. πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†

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    1. judeitakali says:

      That’s so encouraging. Thank you Eugi.

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure, Jude.

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  12. bejamin4 says:

    Such deep thoughts: “I’ve always thought optimism is a blessing, / That it brings a little happiness in the saddest of times”. The power of optimism. We all could get behind that.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I know some people say too much of it can make us lazy but in all, I think it’s better to have it than not to.

      Like

      1. bejamin4 says:

        Definitely agreed with you.

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  13. Sue Vincent says:

    Stunning poetry, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much SueπŸ’•

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  14. Dora says:

    I love your use of pictures to complement your tonal and verbal imagery. Beautifully passionate.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Dora. I put them for that extra dimension.
      But the words can work on their own too

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      1. Dora says:

        You’re a mage with words, Jude πŸ˜„

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Noooooo, I can’t respond to thisπŸ˜ŠπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—

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      3. Dora says:

        Gotcha!

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