Syllabic transitions. Living a dream

What do you see #45

Watering beauty
Arching ripples of wonder
Marvels made from dreams
See the miracles that bloom
When man and nature combine

Lost in splendours of innovation
Human dreams weilding nature’s tools
She watches light’s refraction
Twirls beneath its spectrum
Glistens in its bliss
In that moment
Dreams come true
And hope
Reigns

She dances with joy
Pirouettes her woes away
Euphoria’s bride

Β© judeitakali


I went a little off book with this one,
Used Sadje’s what do you see photo prompt as inspiration

And incorporated Eugi’s weekly prompt (transition) in an unorthodox way.
Thanks to Colleen, I’m something of a syllabic nerd.
I transitioned between forms,
From tanka, to nonet, to senryu. Thus utilising Eugi’s prompt.

Hope you enjoy this,

Stay safe, and keep that idea bulb glowing.

P.s
My horror nerves are tingling so heads up for my next post.

57 Comments Add yours

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you AashiπŸ’›πŸŒΌ

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      1. judeitakali says:

        Thank you 😊

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      2. You’re welcome !πŸ™ƒπŸŒΌ

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  1. bejamin4 says:

    That’s awesome: “See the miracles that bloom / When man and nature combine”. Man and nature should come together instead of being at odds, for sure. Nature isn’t something to overtake, but to live alongside of. Cool words as always.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. Glad you appreciate this.πŸ™πŸΎ

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  2. Exquisitely woven Jude. Simply loved this β™₯️

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika 🌸. I’m glad you do

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  3. Sadje says:

    You did a great job with both prompts. A beautiful poem Jude. Thanks for joining in the challenge

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for the awesome image.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‰

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  4. Era says:

    Beautiful πŸ’™

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot Era 🌼

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      1. Era says:

        Anytime !

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  5. WOW. Gorgeous Jude. Bravo.
    xoxo

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Gabriella πŸ’•πŸŒ·

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      1. My pleasure 🌸🌸🌸

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Was just about to email you. I’ve been feeling your absence. Haven’t been finding your posts in the reader and generally no interaction. I hope you’re okay

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      3. Thank you so much for your beautiful words. You can email me anytime. I did post but I am behind on reading. Trying to catch up today πŸ€—

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  6. Chris Hall says:

    That worked really well, Jude. All the elements feel effortless, like our dancer’s moves. Eagerly awaiting the results of that tingling πŸ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad you said that. Thank you so much Chris. πŸ§‘πŸ’›β€οΈ

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  7. -Eugenia says:

    You replied to this comment.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Eugi 🌷

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot 🌼

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  8. Smitha V says:

    Its lovely how you were able to combine so many prompts and string something where the transition flowed so smoothly.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you appreciate this. It was actually quite enjoyable 🌼

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