Love’s bane #Haibun

Colleen’s weekly challenge.

Love’s bane.

If you have to look, you will
never see
If you have seen, you need only to look.

Dark sinister night
Bullfrogs croak and crickets chirp
Prequels to silence

Your heartbeat flutters
I can feel it in the dark
My subconscious is attuned to its rhythm
All those nights we’ve lain so close
I’ve felt your heart’s every inflection
Known its needs before you’ve thought them
But not this time

This time your heart beats different
This time we tread an uncharted path
A dark way moist with fear
There is no compass to point us north
No map through spiteful contours
There is only a feeling!
Ominous
Deadly and foreboding!

I’ve always known your heartbeat,
Understood it,
But now there’s something else
An eerie presence lurking in these stygian shadows
A beast stalking our every move
Dread brewing in its wake
And I am scared!
Scared that we will never be the same
Scared that before our journey’s end,
Your heart will fade away from mine

For none can map a lover’s road,
When heartbreak prowls its every turn

Lonely nightingale
Sing us your love lullaby
May we never wake

ยฉ judeitakali


Colleen’s theme prompt Maps

I had to write this under the moonlight. There was a 24hr blackout and all my devices were not charged.

It was frustrating until I decided to make the most of it, then it was wonderfully nostalgic.
Had to dial down on the horror though. Too many unfamiliar night shadows.

I did have fun, trading modern comforts for traditional ways. Won’t make a habit of it though.

Hope you enjoy this. It’s quite metaphoric.

Stay safe everyone, stay loving.

50 Comments Add yours

  1. kittysverses says:

    Talk about turning disadvantages to one’s advantage, weaving a superb piece of poem during blackout. Nicely done, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kitty ๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒธ

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Shruba says:

    Such tender words plays on the heartstrings of anyone reads this. Beautifully worded. โค

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shruba. I’m humbled ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ’•

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  3. Writing in the moonlight sound so beautiful! As is this poem. Excellent work, jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      It was actually, I had to squint a little though.

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      1. Maybe that added to the beauty of your poetry!

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      2. judeitakali says:

        I should have taken advantage and written a romantic piece, but I got torn in between horror and love

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      3. I hope you don’t have another blackout but in case you do, next time it could be romantic. I’ll be waiting for it!

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      4. judeitakali says:

        Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ

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  4. michnavs says:

    you are a poetic genius Jude..

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Oh thank you so much Michelle.

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  5. -Eugenia says:

    Amazing poetry and written under the moonlight! Wow! I love the line “prequels to silence”, and also feel it would make a great title.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Woah, that’s two people who have told me that. I like it now. Would make a great title for a book or future poetry collection

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        Yes, it would!

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  6. Jules says:

    Trying new directions is always a fun challenge. I thought Hansel and Gretel getting caught in the Gingerbread Candy house…
    But they escaped! Or at least in one version they did.

    Though I think your direction was leading elsewhere. As if some negative force were separating a loving couple and only in death could they escape it.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      The negative force is heartbreak. A monster that splits take greatest of loves. And is unpredictable hence making love ‘unmapable.’

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  7. Gave me the chills Jude.. an excellent response to this week’s prompt..

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Di. It means alot

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Traci. I’m so grateful

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      1. You’re welcome, Jude!

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  8. Written under the moonlight makes this piece so special! The oracle has been sending you messages! Brilliant work. I can’t wait until Halloween! We should have a Halloween horror poetry contest! ๐Ÿ˜€

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