The survivor’s plea #etheree and #prose

When the soul battles each day to survive,
A slip into darkness may seem inevitable,
The numbness of relinquishing morals,
And doing whatever it takes to survive.

There is a saying amongst the women of Yemen,
“Death will come tomorrow.”
And accepting this frees many from what is beyond their control.
In a place where wealth is measured in faith,
Where hope is their most precious currency.

Care.org

War
Disease
Destruction
Plights old as time
Origins of man
A plague from the heavens
When angels smote each other
And violence was given life
Is war a gene born in all mankind
An instinct that needs only a trigger
Are those who stay true the strongest of all
Mothers who take each child as their own
Children who love in times of hate
And men with only one choice
To defend family
When will karma come?
Where is justice?
For how long
Must they
wait
?

Photo by amnesty international

Yemen is home to the world’s worst humanitarian crisis,
Read more

I’m sharing a link to the UNICEF donor page;
LINK
Please click, verify, and do what you can.

May the force be with you

P.S,

For poetry lovers, an etheree is a poem with a syllabic meter of (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
I wrote two that mirror each other in their shape, one being reversed.

I hope you enjoy this, and that it moves you.

Β© judeitakali

60 Comments Add yours

  1. Ramya Vivek says:

    Brilliant!
    And your question is valid and heartfelt. When will karma come?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      😌thank you so much Ramya, 🧑

      Like

  2. Dora says:

    Oh how you open your heart to the plight of the poor and suffering as we all should starting with our neighbors! Is that really a saying in Yemen? How sad! Compassionate and deeply expressive ✨

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Dora, it is. I heard it from a documentary on BBC.

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  3. Ingrid says:

    A powerful poem and great that you highlighted the humanitarian crisis in Yemen.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Tank you Ingrid, I’m glad to try and spread awareness

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  4. When will Karma come indeed! A very heartfelt poem. One that tugged at my heartstrings. I loved the 2 etherees and I loved it even more that you had them mirror each other. Well done, Jude

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shweta. I’m glad you appreciate the etherees, I wanted to put the effort of syllabic restrictions in this.🧑

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      1. I’m glad that you did so πŸ™‚

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      2. judeitakali says:

        πŸ™πŸΎπŸ€—

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  5. Bulbul says:

    Powerful piece, Jude, it moved me, most definitely.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad it did. Thank you Bubble 🧑🧑

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Bulbul says:

        Hi, Jude! As promised I’ve posted the continuation for the 20 word story- Rejuvenation. Hopefully you’ll not be disappointed by the effort.
        Cheers πŸ™πŸ€—

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Thank you so much for telling me, I’ve just been over and I’m in bliss, for reading it.

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      3. Bulbul says:

        I am very glad to know this, Jude! Thank you for your encouragement to extend this one, I am grateful.

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  6. Jude, your words are so powerful and eloquent. You captured the pain, the sentiments, the plight and the essence so well. ✨

    Like

    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad you think so, my intention was exactly thisπŸ§‘πŸŒ·πŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Very moving, Jude! Your beautiful double etheree was powerful and well constructed.
    These questions raise their head every time there is suffering…natural or manmade. Stay well. ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam. I’m glad you appreciate this

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You are welcome.v

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Era says:

    A very powerful piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

      Like

      1. Era says:

        Anytime !

        Liked by 1 person

  9. michnavs says:

    What a powerful etheree Jude..and yes this is timely❀❀❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Michelle. πŸ’•πŸŒ·πŸ§‘

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Sadje says:

    Very moving poem

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m so glad you think so 😊 🌷

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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