Dreams of Tomorrow #TWT

What do you see #51

Drunk on the prescience of dreams
I clung to love’s premonition
You and I together, forever.

But forever was ending


It is said that true love waits,
But time waits for no one.

Eugi’s weekly promptforesight
Bubble’s twenty word Tuesdayunbalanced.

This song was in my head while writing this, lol.
Apologies for the hoarse late night voice.

46 Comments Add yours

  1. Sadje says:

    Beautiful! Succinct and sweet

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sadje🧑

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‰

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam

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      1. You are welcome.

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  2. Chris Hall says:

    So much said in so few words, Jude. This works so well.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you mon amiπŸ˜ƒ

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  3. Short, crisp and beautiful Jude!!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika 🌸🧑

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  4. HappySoul says:

    This is so perfect, well crafted Priya 😊

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Priya🧑

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Gosh so sorry about that Jude!! I thought I was reading Cozy quiet corner blog πŸ™†β€β™€οΈπŸ™†β€β™€οΈπŸ™†β€β™€οΈ

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      2. judeitakali says:

        No problem, I thought you were finally sharing your name.

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      3. HappySoul says:

        πŸ˜„πŸ˜„good one! But no I continue to be HS, Happy, Ru for some more time .. ☺️

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  5. Era says:

    Beautifully penned !

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

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      1. Era says:

        Anytime !

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  6. Ramya Vivek says:

    Beautiful. You nailed the prompts, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Ramya πŸ™πŸΎ

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  7. -Eugenia says:

    Such beautiful words, Jude! Thank you so much for joining in!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad I did, it’s a pleasure 🌼

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  8. bejamin4 says:

    Sounds like the the hardest aspect if life to understand, as when two things are at odds: “It is said that true love waits, / But time waits for no one.” Good work!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Indeed it is. Thank you so much Ben

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  9. Shruba says:

    That can hardly be called hoarse voice 😳
    Pretty nice short poem by the way!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Should have said quiet voice πŸ˜„
      Thank you so much Shruba 🌷

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