Dreams of Tomorrow #TWT

What do you see #51

Drunk on the prescience of dreams
I clung to love’s premonition
You and I together, forever.

But forever was ending


It is said that true love waits,
But time waits for no one.

Eugi’s weekly promptforesight
Bubble’s twenty word Tuesdayunbalanced.

This song was in my head while writing this, lol.
Apologies for the hoarse late night voice.

47 Comments Add yours

  1. Sadje says:

    Beautiful! Succinct and sweet

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sadje๐Ÿงก

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      1. Sadje says:

        Youโ€™re welcome ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  2. Well done, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam

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      1. You are welcome.

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  3. Chris Hall says:

    So much said in so few words, Jude. This works so well.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you mon ami๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  4. Short, crisp and beautiful Jude!!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿงก

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  5. HappySoul says:

    This is so perfect, well crafted Priya ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Priya๐Ÿงก

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Gosh so sorry about that Jude!! I thought I was reading Cozy quiet corner blog ๐Ÿ™†โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™†โ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ™†โ€โ™€๏ธ

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      2. judeitakali says:

        No problem, I thought you were finally sharing your name.

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      3. HappySoul says:

        ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„good one! But no I continue to be HS, Happy, Ru for some more time .. โ˜บ๏ธ

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  6. Era says:

    Beautifully penned !

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

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      1. Era says:

        Anytime !

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  7. Ramya Vivek says:

    Beautiful. You nailed the prompts, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Ramya ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ

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  8. -Eugenia says:

    Such beautiful words, Jude! Thank you so much for joining in!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad I did, it’s a pleasure ๐ŸŒผ

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  9. bejamin4 says:

    Sounds like the the hardest aspect if life to understand, as when two things are at odds: “It is said that true love waits, / But time waits for no one.” Good work!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Indeed it is. Thank you so much Ben

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      1. bejamin4 says:

        Welcome!

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  10. Shruba says:

    That can hardly be called hoarse voice ๐Ÿ˜ณ
    Pretty nice short poem by the way!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Should have said quiet voice ๐Ÿ˜„
      Thank you so much Shruba ๐ŸŒท

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  11. Silver Stone says:

    Lovely and beautiful take on the prompts! Few powerful words alone can tell a whole story

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Silver ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ๐ŸŒผ

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      1. Silver Stone says:

        Anytime, Jude ๐Ÿ˜„

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  12. Jules says:

    Kitties are sleeping on low volume I couldn’t hear the words in the video.

    Forever can seem timed and timeless. I was watching a Star Trek episode where Mr. Worf ends up in several realities at once… Needless to say it was confusing for him and those he had to leave behind when e finally made it back to the time line he belonged in.

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  13. kittysverses says:

    Loved this line,
    But forever was ending . So true but often forgotten.
    Beautiful poem, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kitty๐ŸŒผ

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. michnavs says:

    “It is said that true love waits,
    But time waits for no one.”…. ahhhh i can’t stop nodding in agreement Jude

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    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you agree Michelle ๐ŸŒผ

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  15. Wait, so you sing and write? I’m blown away! Haha. Love your take on the prompt. Beautiful as always

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Haha, I sing like any other person, not bad, not exceptional. My friends do pick me to represent if it’s a karaoke night out, back before Covid.

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  16. Bulbul says:

    A beautiful take on the prompt, Jude, sweet and lovely and fitting!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Bubble. I hope you’re okay.

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      1. Bulbul says:

        Thank you so much Jude for your kind-hearted concern, I am doing okay at the moment. I only have been awful busy lately syuck in varied things. I really hope you are doing great as well, my friend!
        Blessings & sunshines

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  17. Such an inspiring and motivating!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much.

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      1. You’re much welcome!

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