Drunk on the prescience of dreams
I clung to love’s premonition
You and I together, forever.
But forever was ending
It is said that true love waits,
But time waits for no one.
Eugi’s weekly prompt – foresight
Bubble’s twenty word Tuesday – unbalanced.
This song was in my head while writing this, lol.
Apologies for the hoarse late night voice.
Beautiful! Succinct and sweet
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Thank you so much Sadje🧡
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You’re welcome 😉
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Well done, Jude!
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Thank you so much Punam
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You are welcome.
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So much said in so few words, Jude. This works so well.
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Thank you mon ami😃
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Short, crisp and beautiful Jude!!
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Thank you so much Radhika 🌸🧡
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This is so perfect, well crafted Priya 😊
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Thank you so much Priya🧡
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Gosh so sorry about that Jude!! I thought I was reading Cozy quiet corner blog 🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️
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No problem, I thought you were finally sharing your name.
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😄😄good one! But no I continue to be HS, Happy, Ru for some more time .. ☺️
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Beautifully penned !
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Thank you so much Era
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Anytime !
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Beautiful. You nailed the prompts, Jude!
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Thank you so much Ramya 🙏🏾
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Such beautiful words, Jude! Thank you so much for joining in!
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I’m glad I did, it’s a pleasure 🌼
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Sounds like the the hardest aspect if life to understand, as when two things are at odds: “It is said that true love waits, / But time waits for no one.” Good work!
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Indeed it is. Thank you so much Ben
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Welcome!
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That can hardly be called hoarse voice 😳
Pretty nice short poem by the way!
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Should have said quiet voice 😄
Thank you so much Shruba 🌷
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Lovely and beautiful take on the prompts! Few powerful words alone can tell a whole story
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Thank you so much Silver 🙏🏾🌼
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Anytime, Jude 😄
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Kitties are sleeping on low volume I couldn’t hear the words in the video.
Forever can seem timed and timeless. I was watching a Star Trek episode where Mr. Worf ends up in several realities at once… Needless to say it was confusing for him and those he had to leave behind when e finally made it back to the time line he belonged in.
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Loved this line,
But forever was ending . So true but often forgotten.
Beautiful poem, Jude. 🙂
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Thank you so much Kitty🌼
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You are welcome, Jude. 🙂
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“It is said that true love waits,
But time waits for no one.”…. ahhhh i can’t stop nodding in agreement Jude
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I’m glad you agree Michelle 🌼
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Wait, so you sing and write? I’m blown away! Haha. Love your take on the prompt. Beautiful as always
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Haha, I sing like any other person, not bad, not exceptional. My friends do pick me to represent if it’s a karaoke night out, back before Covid.
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A beautiful take on the prompt, Jude, sweet and lovely and fitting!
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Thank you so much Bubble. I hope you’re okay.
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Thank you so much Jude for your kind-hearted concern, I am doing okay at the moment. I only have been awful busy lately syuck in varied things. I really hope you are doing great as well, my friend!
Blessings & sunshines
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Such an inspiring and motivating!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re much welcome!
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