She calls!
A sigh upon the monsoon
A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter
Where I am
There, the ley-lines meet
Paradise
Come find me, she coos and coxes
A mother, dangling a reward for an eager child.
Follow the ancient lines of old
Slide the angles on the map
And protract your soul into the ether
Call to me, as I call to you.
Where it all began
You cannot fully recall
You can only feel
When life’s mystic lines unite
And love intersects with peace
ยฉ judeitakali
This post involves three photo prompts that all harmonized naturally for me;
- Colleen’s weekly challenge – first image.
- Reena’s exploration challenge – second image.
- Sadje’s What do you see – third image.
Writing this was really refreshing,
P.S
If you missed yesterday’s post, I think you should go check it out here;
Guardians of the veil
Wonderful!
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Hey Pallavi, so good to see you.๐งก๐๐๐ท
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Very well-done mashup! I like the last line best for the sense of calmness it brings.
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Thank you so much Reena, I loved the geometry dimension a little too much, personally.๐
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Thanks ๐
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Nature’s spirit lines ….. by judeitakali
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Thank you Reena
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Very well done Jude. Thanks
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My pleasure Sadje ๐ผ๐ท
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much Jay
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This part really took me there:
“A sigh upon the monsoon
A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter”
Good words!
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Thank you for saying this Ben, beginnings are always so difficult.
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Agreed. They can be. But you handled this well!
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Beautifully innovative.. Loved it โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much Sonia๐งก๐
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Love how you brought them all together!
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Thank you so much Punam, it’s not a masterpiece by far but the feeling I got when I lined these up and something clicked for me, was quite special. Wish I could have shared that in the afternotes as well
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You are welcome, Jude. In my humble opinion, the day anyone of us writes a masterpiece we will cease to write more. Every time we write well, it is an impetus to do better in the next one. ๐
So let’s keep writing the best we can. ๐
Though I must admit, they all clicked very well. ๐
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Yes please, I’m with you ๐ฏ on that๐
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โค๏ธ๐ค
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Good one !
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Thank you Era๐๐พ
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Anytime ๐
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I love those gentle voices and the sense of mystery beyond our knowledge..
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Thank you for saying this Chris, my feelings as I wrote this,๐๐
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Love the way you combine the challenges! Well done!
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Thank you so much Elizabeth ๐๐๐
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WOW. Miraculous post. Bravo.
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Thank you so much Gabriella.๐ค๐ค๐ค๐
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My pleasure ๐น
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Beautiful writing as always! I love your takes on the various prompts! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you so much Rishika ๐๐พ๐งก
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Wow this is creativity! Lovely poem ๐๐
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Thank you so much Prerna๐๐พ๐งก
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This three in one is superb, Jude. ๐
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Thank you so much Kitty๐
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You are welcome, Jude. ๐
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Love intersecting with peace…what a beautiful thought. (K)
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Thanks alot K๐ท
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Love intersects with peace! Just reading this line itself is so peaceful Jude. All prompts beautifully combined ๐๐ผ
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Thanks alot Ru
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Beautiful.
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Thanks alot ๐
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Superbly rendered, Jude! A masterpiece, in my opinion. ๐ฅฐ
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Aww shucks๐, thank you so much for this Eugi๐
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My pleasure! ๐
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