Nature’s Spirit lines

She calls!
A sigh upon the monsoon
A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter

Where I am
There, the ley-lines meet
Paradise

Come find me, she coos and coxes
A mother, dangling a reward for an eager child.
Follow the ancient lines of old
Slide the angles on the map
And protract your soul into the ether
Call to me, as I call to you.

Where it all began
You cannot fully recall
You can only feel
When life’s mystic lines unite
And love intersects with peace


Β© judeitakali

This post involves three photo prompts that all harmonized naturally for me;

  1. Colleen’s weekly challengefirst image.
  2. Reena’s exploration challengesecond image.
  3. Sadje’s What do you see third image.

Writing this was really refreshing,

P.S

If you missed yesterday’s post, I think you should go check it out here;
Guardians of the veil

60 Comments Add yours

  1. Pallavi says:

    Wonderful!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. judeitakali says:

      Hey Pallavi, so good to see you.πŸ§‘πŸ’œπŸ˜ƒπŸŒ·

      Like

  2. Reena Saxena says:

    Very well-done mashup! I like the last line best for the sense of calmness it brings.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena, I loved the geometry dimension a little too much, personally.πŸ˜…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Reena Saxena says:

        Thanks πŸ™‚

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  3. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Nature’s spirit lines ….. by judeitakali

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Reena

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  4. Sadje says:

    Very well done Jude. Thanks

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      My pleasure Sadje 🌼🌷

      Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jay

      Liked by 1 person

  5. bejamin4 says:

    This part really took me there:

    “A sigh upon the monsoon
    A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
    And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter”

    Good words!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for saying this Ben, beginnings are always so difficult.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. bejamin4 says:

        Agreed. They can be. But you handled this well!

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  6. Sobia says:

    Beautifully innovative.. Loved it ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much SoniaπŸ§‘πŸ’œ

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  7. Love how you brought them all together!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam, it’s not a masterpiece by far but the feeling I got when I lined these up and something clicked for me, was quite special. Wish I could have shared that in the afternotes as well

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      1. You are welcome, Jude. In my humble opinion, the day anyone of us writes a masterpiece we will cease to write more. Every time we write well, it is an impetus to do better in the next one. 😊
        So let’s keep writing the best we can. πŸ’™
        Though I must admit, they all clicked very well. 😊

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Yes please, I’m with you πŸ’― on thatπŸ˜ƒ

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      3. β€οΈπŸ€—

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  8. Era says:

    Good one !

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you EraπŸ™πŸΎ

      Like

      1. Era says:

        Anytime 😊

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Chris Hall says:

    I love those gentle voices and the sense of mystery beyond our knowledge..

    Liked by 2 people

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for saying this Chris, my feelings as I wrote this,πŸ˜ƒπŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Elizabeth says:

    Love the way you combine the challenges! Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Elizabeth πŸ’•πŸ’™πŸ’œ

      Liked by 1 person

  11. WOW. Miraculous post. Bravo.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Gabriella.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’ž

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      1. My pleasure 🌹

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  12. Beautiful writing as always! I love your takes on the various prompts! ❀️❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Rishika πŸ™πŸΎπŸ§‘

      Liked by 1 person

  13. besondersite says:

    Wow this is creativity! Lovely poem πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much PrernaπŸ™πŸΎπŸ§‘

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  14. kittysverses says:

    This three in one is superb, Jude. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much KittyπŸ’œ

      Liked by 1 person

      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  15. memadtwo says:

    Love intersecting with peace…what a beautiful thought. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot K🌷

      Liked by 1 person

  16. HappySoul says:

    Love intersects with peace! Just reading this line itself is so peaceful Jude. All prompts beautifully combined πŸ‘πŸΌ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot Ru

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  17. Indira says:

    Beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot πŸ’›

      Liked by 1 person

  18. -Eugenia says:

    Superbly rendered, Jude! A masterpiece, in my opinion. πŸ₯°

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Aww shucks😊, thank you so much for this EugiπŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure! πŸ˜‰

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