Nature’s Spirit lines

She calls!
A sigh upon the monsoon
A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter

Where I am
There, the ley-lines meet
Paradise

Come find me, she coos and coxes
A mother, dangling a reward for an eager child.
Follow the ancient lines of old
Slide the angles on the map
And protract your soul into the ether
Call to me, as I call to you.

Where it all began
You cannot fully recall
You can only feel
When life’s mystic lines unite
And love intersects with peace


ยฉ judeitakali

This post involves three photo prompts that all harmonized naturally for me;

  1. Colleen’s weekly challengefirst image.
  2. Reena’s exploration challengesecond image.
  3. Sadje’s What do you see third image.

Writing this was really refreshing,

P.S

If you missed yesterday’s post, I think you should go check it out here;
Guardians of the veil

60 Comments Add yours

  1. Pallavi says:

    Wonderful!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Hey Pallavi, so good to see you.๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐ŸŒท

      Like

  2. Reena Saxena says:

    Very well-done mashup! I like the last line best for the sense of calmness it brings.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Reena, I loved the geometry dimension a little too much, personally.๐Ÿ˜…

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      1. Reena Saxena says:

        Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Nature’s spirit lines ….. by judeitakali

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Reena

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  4. Sadje says:

    Very well done Jude. Thanks

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    1. judeitakali says:

      My pleasure Sadje ๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒท

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jay

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  5. bejamin4 says:

    This part really took me there:

    “A sigh upon the monsoon
    A whisper, chiming through vast Savannah plains
    And a soothing breeze, gliding on rumours of winter”

    Good words!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for saying this Ben, beginnings are always so difficult.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. bejamin4 says:

        Agreed. They can be. But you handled this well!

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  6. Sobia says:

    Beautifully innovative.. Loved it โค๏ธ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Sonia๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’œ

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  7. Love how you brought them all together!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Punam, it’s not a masterpiece by far but the feeling I got when I lined these up and something clicked for me, was quite special. Wish I could have shared that in the afternotes as well

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      1. You are welcome, Jude. In my humble opinion, the day anyone of us writes a masterpiece we will cease to write more. Every time we write well, it is an impetus to do better in the next one. ๐Ÿ˜Š
        So let’s keep writing the best we can. ๐Ÿ’™
        Though I must admit, they all clicked very well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Yes please, I’m with you ๐Ÿ’ฏ on that๐Ÿ˜ƒ

        Liked by 1 person

      3. โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

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  8. Era says:

    Good one !

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Era๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ

      Like

      1. Era says:

        Anytime ๐Ÿ˜Š

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Chris Hall says:

    I love those gentle voices and the sense of mystery beyond our knowledge..

    Liked by 2 people

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you for saying this Chris, my feelings as I wrote this,๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Elizabeth says:

    Love the way you combine the challenges! Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Elizabeth ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ

      Liked by 1 person

  11. WOW. Miraculous post. Bravo.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Gabriella.๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’ž

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      1. My pleasure ๐ŸŒน

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  12. Beautiful writing as always! I love your takes on the various prompts! โค๏ธโค๏ธ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Rishika ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ๐Ÿงก

      Liked by 1 person

  13. besondersite says:

    Wow this is creativity! Lovely poem ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’–

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Prerna๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ๐Ÿงก

      Liked by 1 person

  14. kittysverses says:

    This three in one is superb, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Kitty๐Ÿ’œ

      Liked by 1 person

      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Jude. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  15. memadtwo says:

    Love intersecting with peace…what a beautiful thought. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot K๐ŸŒท

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  16. HappySoul says:

    Love intersects with peace! Just reading this line itself is so peaceful Jude. All prompts beautifully combined ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot Ru

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  17. Indira says:

    Beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot ๐Ÿ’›

      Liked by 1 person

  18. -Eugenia says:

    Superbly rendered, Jude! A masterpiece, in my opinion. ๐Ÿฅฐ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Aww shucks๐Ÿ˜Š, thank you so much for this Eugi๐Ÿ’•

      Liked by 1 person

      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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