Irresistible. A Shadorma sequence #poetry and #prose

Colleen’s weekly challenge.

Moonlight touch
Soft and arrousing
She calls me
Her whisper
An intimate allusion
Shameless with mischief

My heart flutters…

Faint caress
A smidge upon skin
‘I want you’
She tells me
Undaunted in her desire
Audacious with need

Her seduction, enthralling.

Signs of lust
A glint in the eye
Winks of love
Blush and smiles
A dim candlelit dinner
Together at last

I ache without you in my arms…

Eager hearts
Drifting through the night
In shadows
Our love spills
Sieved through a gluttonous kiss
Limbs that cannot wait

Passions overflow, love is impatient.

Risen moon
Full with potential
Beguiling
Bewitching
Spraying its sensual rays
Irresistible

Oh to follow love’s whim!
When unbound from life’s routine
To explore its pheromone trail
And enjoy your chemical romance.

© judeitakali


Colleen’s weekly challenge – synonyms for hint and bold

The shadorma follows a (3/5/3/3/7/5) syllabic count, and it’s been ages since I wrote one.
So I went all out, and wrote five.

I’m in a romantic mood and felt compelled to share with you,

In this post, the bits of prose court and woo the shadorma.
Romance in the words, and also in the form.

I hope you enjoy this,

For the one you love

78 responses to “Irresistible. A Shadorma sequence #poetry and #prose”

  1. Wonderful and sensual my friend 😄

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    1. Thank you so much Lexi, so glad to see your comment 🌼🌷

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    1. Thank you so much Hema, I’m blushing 😃🧡

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    1. Thank you Miss B. I’m so pleased.

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  2. This is very passionate and sensual: full of the yearning of love. ‘I ache without you in my arms…’ I loved this line, thanks for sharing!

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  3. Wow! You’ve outdone yourself Jude. 👍

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    1. Really, I’m so pleased you think so. Thank you Sadje 💛 🌸

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      1. You’re welcome my friend

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    1. Thank you so much Era

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  4. Absolutely gorgeous Jude 👍🏻

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    1. Thank you so much Radhika, I’m glad you appreciate this

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  5. Eiiiy!!! This love… I am curious about the muse.

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    1. I’m finally using the travel muse, the memories are fresh so the poetry flows out involuntarily

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  6. A shadorma, huh? I think you’ve made a fan of this style. Beautifully done, Jude.

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    1. Thank you so much Dora, read more about it online when you can, I simplified the description

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    1. Thank you so much Pallavi 💜

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  7. Loved in,Jude. ❤️

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    1. Thank you so much Michaela 🧡

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  8. Ooh La La – how romantic! Superbly penned.

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    1. Thank you so much Eugi. This is a wonderful reaction 😃🤗

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      1. My pleasure! ❣️

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  9. Gorgeous poetry, Jude. Wow. Very romantic! ❤ xo

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    1. Thank you so much Vashti

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  10. This is an absolute beauty! Loved it.

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  11. You are really inspired! 5 of them! I’d put the guilty on the moon! Thanks for the flowers! 🙂

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    1. My pleasure Elizabeth 🌷
      Thank you

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  12. Jude, how romantic, the picture, the shadorma, the suggestions of love. What’s not to love about this poem?

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    1. Ahh, thank you so much Marsha, I think I saw an email from you?🧡

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  13. These are feeling very sensual, Jude. Well done!

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    1. Thank you kindly Susi

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      1. You are welcome, Jude! 🙂

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  14. Wow!! Love it😊. So very nicely done Jude. Aah!!

    Pat

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    1. Thank you so much Jazzy

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  15. Beautiful and well-written poems, Jude!

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    1. Thank you so much. I’m glad you like em

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  16. Romantic, sensual, and a shadorma sequence! I have no idea why my comment isn’t here. Maybe I’m in spam? I do love the way you structured your sequence. Very appealing! ❤️

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  17. Thank you so much Ingrid. I’m glad you liked it

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  18. Very steamy and stirring, such passion laid completely bare by the light of the moon!

    My favourite lines are “Our love spills / Sieved through a gluttonous kiss”.

    To channel love through the sensuous kiss, such divine bliss. Wonderful words, Jude!

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    1. Thank you so much. I’m glad you appreciate this.🙏🏾

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  19. Such a lovely piece 😊💙

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    1. Thank you kindly 🙏🏾

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  20. Jude, this is vivid with images and visceral. I can’t pick whichvis my favorite verse .
    ‘ Faint caress
    A smidge upon skin
    ‘I want you’
    She tells me
    Undaunted in her desire
    Audacious with need’

    Your verse above captured my emotions. Three words- smidge , undaunted and audacious.
    Words I connect with.

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    1. Thank you so much Daisy.
      I hadn’t revisited this in a while, but I remember too well how pleased I was with these shadorma, and how I was able to release sensuality in them.
      Thank you so much,
      This really makes me so happy

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  21. The right to chose who you love is a basic and necessary one, Jude. Beautiful as always.

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    1. Thank you so much Roberta.

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  22. Jude, what an amazing write! Sensual and passionate. Thanks for reposting it. I missed it earlier because I was on a break. 💙

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    1. Thank you so much. Someone actually requested that I repost. And I was more than happy to do so.😃

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      1. You are welcome. 😊

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  23. This flows beautifully with sensual tension. (K)

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    1. Glad you appreciate it K💕🧡

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  24. Love this Jude! It’s incredibly awe inspiring and romantic. A dream for many💖

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    1. I was really fantasizing alot at the time😄

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  25. Very sensual and passionate!

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    1. Thank you so much Merrill, glad you appreciate that.😃

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  26. I know you are taking a break… Have a wonderful ‘off’ month ‘on’ whatever you do! Cheers Jules

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    1. Hi Jules, it’s been a really nice break.

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  27. You’re an amazing poet, my friend. This is luscious.

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    1. Thank you Diana, I was in the mood when I wrote these.

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  28. These are wonderful shadormas Jude! Very evocative, and full of yearning.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙏🏾

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    1. Thank you so much Luisa

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  29. Oh this is gorgeous, Jude. A tribute to love, passion and the power of a moonlit night. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much Chris. I’m glad you appreciate this.

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