Irresistible. A Shadorma sequence #poetry and #prose

Colleen’s weekly challenge.

Moonlight touch
Soft and arrousing
She calls me
Her whisper
An intimate allusion
Shameless with mischief

My heart flutters…

Faint caress
A smidge upon skin
‘I want you’
She tells me
Undaunted in her desire
Audacious with need

Her seduction, enthralling.

Signs of lust
A glint in the eye
Winks of love
Blush and smiles
A dim candlelit dinner
Together at last

I ache without you in my arms…

Eager hearts
Drifting through the night
In shadows
Our love spills
Sieved through a gluttonous kiss
Limbs that cannot wait

Passions overflow, love is impatient.

Risen moon
Full with potential
Beguiling
Bewitching
Spraying its sensual rays
Irresistible

Oh to follow love’s whim!
When unbound from life’s routine
To explore its pheromone trail
And enjoy your chemical romance.

Β© judeitakali


Colleen’s weekly challenge – synonyms for hint and bold

The shadorma follows a (3/5/3/3/7/5) syllabic count, and it’s been ages since I wrote one.
So I went all out, and wrote five.

I’m in a romantic mood and felt compelled to share with you,

In this post, the bits of prose court and woo the shadorma.
Romance in the words, and also in the form.

I hope you enjoy this,

For the one you love

67 Comments Add yours

  1. theweesmirk says:

    Wonderful and sensual my friend πŸ˜„

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Lexi, so glad to see your comment 🌼🌷

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  2. Awesome!🀩

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Hema, I’m blushing πŸ˜ƒπŸ§‘

      Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Miss B. I’m so pleased.

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      1. Your’e welcome πŸ˜„

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  3. Ingrid says:

    This is very passionate and sensual: full of the yearning of love. β€˜I ache without you in my arms…’ I loved this line, thanks for sharing!

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  4. Sadje says:

    Wow! You’ve outdone yourself Jude. πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Really, I’m so pleased you think so. Thank you Sadje πŸ’› 🌸

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  5. Era says:

    Awesome !

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Era

      Like

      1. Era says:

        Anytime !

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  6. Absolutely gorgeous Jude πŸ‘πŸ»

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Radhika, I’m glad you appreciate this

      Like

  7. justcalmwildness says:

    Eiiiy!!! This love… I am curious about the muse.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m finally using the travel muse, the memories are fresh so the poetry flows out involuntarily

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  8. Dora says:

    A shadorma, huh? I think you’ve made a fan of this style. Beautifully done, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Dora, read more about it online when you can, I simplified the description

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  9. Pallavi says:

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Pallavi πŸ’œ

      Like

  10. mariamichaela says:

    Loved in,Jude. ❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Michaela 🧑

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  11. -Eugenia says:

    Ooh La La – how romantic! Superbly penned.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Eugi. This is a wonderful reaction πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—

      Liked by 1 person

      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure! ❣️

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  12. Vashti Q says:

    Gorgeous poetry, Jude. Wow. Very romantic! ❀ xo

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Vashti

      Liked by 1 person

  13. gdutta17 says:

    This is an absolute beauty! Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

  14. Elizabeth says:

    You are really inspired! 5 of them! I’d put the guilty on the moon! Thanks for the flowers! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      My pleasure Elizabeth 🌷
      Thank you

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  15. Mehar Ali says:

    Wow! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thanks alot 🧑

      Like

  16. Marsha says:

    Jude, how romantic, the picture, the shadorma, the suggestions of love. What’s not to love about this poem?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Ahh, thank you so much Marsha, I think I saw an email from you?🧑

      Like

  17. Susi Bocks says:

    These are feeling very sensual, Jude. Well done!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you kindly Susi

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You are welcome, Jude! πŸ™‚

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  18. jazzytower says:

    Wow!! Love it😊. So very nicely done Jude. Aah!!

    Pat

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Jazzy

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