Irresistible. A Shadorma sequence #poetry and #prose

Colleen’s weekly challenge.

Moonlight touch
Soft and arrousing
She calls me
Her whisper
An intimate allusion
Shameless with mischief

My heart flutters…

Faint caress
A smidge upon skin
‘I want you’
She tells me
Undaunted in her desire
Audacious with need

Her seduction, enthralling.

Signs of lust
A glint in the eye
Winks of love
Blush and smiles
A dim candlelit dinner
Together at last

I ache without you in my arms…

Eager hearts
Drifting through the night
In shadows
Our love spills
Sieved through a gluttonous kiss
Limbs that cannot wait

Passions overflow, love is impatient.

Risen moon
Full with potential
Beguiling
Bewitching
Spraying its sensual rays
Irresistible

Oh to follow love’s whim!
When unbound from life’s routine
To explore its pheromone trail
And enjoy your chemical romance.

© judeitakali


Colleen’s weekly challenge – synonyms for hint and bold

The shadorma follows a (3/5/3/3/7/5) syllabic count, and it’s been ages since I wrote one.
So I went all out, and wrote five.

I’m in a romantic mood and felt compelled to share with you,

In this post, the bits of prose court and woo the shadorma.
Romance in the words, and also in the form.

I hope you enjoy this,

For the one you love

67 Comments Add yours

  1. cheriewhite says:

    Beautiful and well-written poems, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you like em

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  2. Romantic, sensual, and a shadorma sequence! I have no idea why my comment isn’t here. Maybe I’m in spam? I do love the way you structured your sequence. Very appealing! ❤️

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you Colleen

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  3. judeitakali says:

    Thank you so much Ingrid. I’m glad you liked it

    Like

  4. Very steamy and stirring, such passion laid completely bare by the light of the moon!

    My favourite lines are “Our love spills / Sieved through a gluttonous kiss”.

    To channel love through the sensuous kiss, such divine bliss. Wonderful words, Jude!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. I’m glad you appreciate this.🙏🏾

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  5. Such a lovely piece 😊💙

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you kindly 🙏🏾

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  6. Jude, this is vivid with images and visceral. I can’t pick whichvis my favorite verse .
    ‘ Faint caress
    A smidge upon skin
    ‘I want you’
    She tells me
    Undaunted in her desire
    Audacious with need’

    Your verse above captured my emotions. Three words- smidge , undaunted and audacious.
    Words I connect with.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Daisy.
      I hadn’t revisited this in a while, but I remember too well how pleased I was with these shadorma, and how I was able to release sensuality in them.
      Thank you so much,
      This really makes me so happy

      Like

  7. The right to chose who you love is a basic and necessary one, Jude. Beautiful as always.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Roberta.

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  8. Jude, what an amazing write! Sensual and passionate. Thanks for reposting it. I missed it earlier because I was on a break. 💙

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much. Someone actually requested that I repost. And I was more than happy to do so.😃

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You are welcome. 😊

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  9. memadtwo says:

    This flows beautifully with sensual tension. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Glad you appreciate it K💕🧡

      Liked by 1 person

  10. theresaly520 says:

    Love this Jude! It’s incredibly awe inspiring and romantic. A dream for many💖

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I was really fantasizing alot at the time😄

      Liked by 1 person

  11. merrildsmith says:

    Very sensual and passionate!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Merrill, glad you appreciate that.😃

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Jules says:

    I know you are taking a break… Have a wonderful ‘off’ month ‘on’ whatever you do! Cheers Jules

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Hi Jules, it’s been a really nice break.

      Liked by 1 person

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