Painting a perfect love #poetry and #prose

I wish you could stay perfect
But each failed love
And each broken heart
Has painted you anew
Brushed you beyond the spectrum of the human eye,
Paranormal shades
That only the spirit can see,
An astroplane
Where dwells
The true colours,
Of love.

I have seen you
Silhouetted on the fringes of my conscience
And my mind begins to sketch
While the heart paints between the lines

You start off classic,
Perfectly Noir
Plush hair, googoo eyes, and heart-shaped lips
Mysterious, cunning and clever.
A dame, a Queen, a lover
One who has sutured my heart
And let it beat with new colour.

As you lie here in my arms
Obliging to my whims
And oblivious to my thoughts
I think of the perfect shade for your sensual lips
And which colour of shadow to frame your alluring gaze
I must think hard and true
For there is no gloss that can hide the deception in a kiss
No liner to mask the vulnerability in the eyes
No shade to truly hide the lust nor the love
The desperate surrender
Nor the hope of forever
So I must think hard and true
As I paint my perfect you
A portrait for my soul
A blueprint for my heart
And a memory for my mind.

Shades of perfection
The Hidden colours of love
Seen through emotion

Deep down, we know what’s best for us.
But what we want is often different.
Many say perfection does not exist,
But I think it is not seen, nor explained, rather it is felt.
That when we strike the delicate balance between what’s good for us,
And what we want,
Perfection can be found, even amidst the faults.

Β© judeitakali


So think hard, and paint the perfect lover in your mind.
Or just look besides you, each morning and each night.

Blessed New year everyone. I’ve not been online for a while. Looking forward to catching up with your sites. Lemme know what you think about this post.

Stay safe, and stay loving.

45 Comments Add yours

  1. Dora says:

    Jude, what a lovely wedding of mystical desire and wisdom! Enjoyed reading this. πŸ˜€

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you very much Dora. I really appreciate this.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Dora says:

        β€οΈπŸ’œ

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  2. Sadje says:

    A great love poem

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you very much Sadje. I’m grateful for youπŸ™πŸΎ

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. Ingrid says:

    Thank you, Jude: another beautifully woven and thought-provoking poem. I think idealised love we project and yet we feel real love in our hearts. But what are our motives? If there is no motive, I guess that’s real love! Happy New Year to you!

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Ingrid. Yes I agree with you about no motives. It’s hard to fall in love like the first time though, but more than possible to find a better love

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  4. Perfect love sounds so good but does one find it…hmmm…
    Beautifully expressed, Jude. πŸ’™

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I guess it evolves and grows on us sometimes. Then when we tried what we used to want, nothing is better than what we have nurtured.

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  5. vaniheart says:

    BeautifulπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Vani❀️

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Thank you for sharing this beautiful creation with us, it really touches the soul ❀️❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      I’m glad you liked this Hannah. Thank you so very much.πŸ’žπŸŒ·

      Liked by 1 person

      1. It’s a pleasure! ❀️❀️

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  7. memadtwo says:

    Sensual as always. Happy New Year Jude! (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much K. Happy New year to you too 🧑

      Liked by 1 person

  8. PoojaG says:

    Loved the poem and the image at the end was perfect for it!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Pooja for finding time to check inπŸ˜ƒπŸ₯°

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      1. PoojaG says:

        My pleasure 😊😊

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  9. -Eugenia says:

    Beautiful and sensual piece, Jude! Perfect love sometimes found when we least expect it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Eugi

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        Most welcome!

        Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you kindly πŸ™πŸΎ

      Like

  10. michnavs says:

    Wow Jude…just wow…i adore thisπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Michelle 🌸 means alot from you

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Very beautiful words, Jude.

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Robbie, it means alot to me πŸ˜ƒπŸ’›

      Liked by 1 person

  12. You write so beautiful, Jude. ❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Shreya. You too. You’ve been MIA for a while now

      Like

  13. Jules says:

    Hmmm…. Have you been distracted – in a good way!
    Just glad that you are still writing. For you have so many wonderful ways to express emotion.

    Be well my friend! ~ Jules

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      A little bit of both. I’m fixing up some things and then I’ll be able to adjust into a new consistent WP schedule

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jules says:

        Even once a month…(for the Sat Sym) just don’t stress!! πŸ˜€

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      2. judeitakali says:

        Thank you Jules. How about a fortnight? I oh so love writing it, but I admit every weekend is going to be very hard

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Jules says:

        Whatever works for you! Keep it fun and enjoyable for you too!

        Liked by 1 person

  14. AnuRijo says:

    Beautifully penned and great art work.. brilliant
    Anu@lafemina

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much.

      Liked by 1 person

  15. What a wonderful poem!!!! I loved it very much

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    1. judeitakali says:

      Thank you so much Luisa🌸

      Liked by 1 person

      1. My pleasure! πŸ™πŸ’œπŸ™

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  16. Ruelha says:

    Aaah that balance…. between what’s good and what we want…..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. judeitakali says:

      Very precious balance 🧑

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Ruelha says:

        Absolutely πŸŽ€πŸŽ€πŸŽ€

        Liked by 1 person

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