Building dreams #whatdoyousee

Cast aside the yolk of fear
And loosen the noose of worry

Reena’s exploration challenge

For the mind must breathe
And the heart must explore

If you plant your feet in a field of dreams
Be sure to pick the best materials
For your dreams are precious,
And My! What marvels they are!

#whatdoyousee prompt

So heave!
Work the pulleys of success
Lay the finest marble
Mount the largest beams
And prop the strongest buttresses
For in these dreams
Dwell your deepest joys

Let the sculpter
Gaze in awe at your foundations
Let the artist
Marvel at the richness of your canvas
Let the jeweller
Crave the light of your display
Let them all come
From far and wide
And right besides
For if hope is drawn to hope
Then may we build
This dream together.

© judeitakali


I hope you enjoy this
I’m trying desperately to get my first book of poetry and prose published,
And a few people on here are helping me quite wholeheartedly.
So this is to you; and building dreams together.

Also for;

Reena’s exploration challenge – worry.

Sadje’s #whatdoyousee – Taj Mahal.

Eugi’s weekly prompt – Jewels

Stay safe everyone, Stay loving

48 responses to “Building dreams #whatdoyousee”

  1. “For the mind must breathe
    And the heart must explore”

    My fave lines.

    By the way, I’m excited for your book. I wish you the best, Jude 😊

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  2. Good Evening, you amaze each every time I am going to send a prayer up & speak you getting published into existence. I love your writing ❤️❤️❤️ Peace , Blessings & Prosperity

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  3. So many emotions are compressed into this poem… from worry to dreams? Realism and fantasy! Well-done Jude. Taj Mahal is itself the best example of poetry in marble, each time you visit, you can feel a tingling in the ears and a tug at the heart… such is the effect of this marvel!

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  4. Exciting news Jude! I did enjoy this poem. My favourite stanza was this:

    If you plant your feet in a field of dreams
    Be sure to pick the best materials
    For your dreams are precious,
    And My! What marvels they are!

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  5. Continued success in that endeavor to get your book published.
    I wish I could have been more help. But I haven’t gotten that far myself…

    Lovely verse of co-operation of all the crafts 🙂

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